Question

求助高中英语改错

Answer 1

你好，
首先这篇小作文写的挺好，可见小作者是有一定功底的，除了几处有小毛病，有可能是作者马虎了，改正如下：
1.gathered together with my schoolmates(或者classmates)，因为只有I是不能gathered together的；
2.indicated that we had become adults 此处明显不能用现在完成时，have改had;
3. we were so moved by their love that…（so… that）
4.最后一句的that不能改为so,别的都改对了

祝你学习进步！

Answer 2

That day we...
by their love so...
remained us that 对的不用改。