Question

一份很短的关于股权转让的英文翻译帮忙核对一下是否准确，谢谢！

中文：
作为A公司的股东之一，B公司感谢C公司和D公司在期间的良好合作，目前B公司作为B集团的控股子公司正在配合集团进行业务的战略重组，非主营的业务拟逐步剥离。B公司在A公司所拥有的3.96%的股权拟出让，按照公司章程的规定，C公司和D公司有优先受让该出让股权的权利，现特征询C公司和D公司对该出让股权的受让意向：
1.拟出让的股权：B公司在A公司3.96%的股权；
2 股权转让价格：按照A公司截至到2008年12月31日的净资产溢价15%作为股权转让价格的计算依据；
3. 希望股权转让款的支付时间：希望在2009年1月25日之前支付股权转让款。
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英文翻译如下：
As the sharesholder of A company. B company appreciate the good cooperative relations with C company and D company . In concert with the recombination of B Group, B company is planning to peel off the non-principal business gradually. B company will sell the 3,96% equity interests of A company. According to the company’s regulations, the other two Partners have the preferential right. Therefore, we consult the C company and D company for the intention of acquire and accept assignment of the equity interests
1. The equity interests transferred: The 3,96% stocks of A company. hold by B company.
2. The price of the equity interests transferred: According to the net assets value ending on December 31, 2008 of A company, 15% premium as the basis of the price of the equity interests transferred.
3 Expected date of payment: Expect it would be paid before the January 25, 2009

希望高手能更正的尽可能更专业一些
好像并不难吧？怎么没人回答呀？

Answer 1

第二句，cooperative relations 直接改为cooperation，个人意见，还有一点， the 3.96% stocks 前面的the 可以去掉。

其他没什么要改的，楼主翻译的挺好！