短文改错改错:About 80 million America are trying to lose weight. That is almost one in each three
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About 80 million （America--Americans） are trying to lose weight. That is almost one in (each--every) three people in the United States. Some eat less of (certainly-certain) foods ，especially fat and sugar. Others take up (medician--medicine) ，exercise or even (had--have) operations. (Lose--To lose/Losing) weight is not easy ，(but--and) it can also cost lots of money. But why (do) so many people in the U. S. want to lose weight ？Many people worry about not looking pretty. Other people are concerned (at--about) their health. Many doctors say that putting on too much weight is not healthy. Almost 40million people weight at least 20percent (much--more) than their usual weight.
About 80 million （America--Americans） are trying to lose weight. That is almost one in (each--every) three people in the United States. Some eat less of (certainly-certain) foods ，especially fat and sugar. Others take up (medician--medicine) ，exercise or even (had--have) operations. (Lose--To lose/Losing) weight is not easy ，(but--and) it can also cost lots of money. But why (do) so many people in the U. S. want to lose weight ？Many people worry about not looking pretty. Other people are concerned (at--about) their health. Many doctors say that putting on too much weight is not healthy. Almost 40million people weight at least 20percent (much--more) than their usual weight.
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