Question

请看下这句英语句子对吗？能不能倒装

These varies kinds of activities not only make me feel relax,but
also let me full of energy and keep good shape.

Answer 1

句子有点问题，而且有中式英语味道。
relax加ed; keep后加in
改一下结构：
These varies kinds of activities not only make me relaxed, full of energy but also keep in good shape.
这些各种各样的活动不仅让我放松，充满活力，而且保持良好的状态。
not only...but also连接两个谓语，不宜倒装。

Answer 2

您好，These varies kinds of activities not only make me feel relax, but also let me full of energy and keep goo shape.  句中有几个语法问题。

1）varies 来自于 vary 的三单形式，为动词，这里应该是拼错了，把 various 打成了 varies 了。

2）make me feel relax 中的 relax 应该采用 relax 的过去分词充当形容词使用，作 feel 的表语，feel 在这里是感官动词作连系动词使用，也就是 I feel relaxed 用法。

3）let me full of energy 和 let me be full of energy 在语法上都是对的，但 let me be full of energy 更为常用 ，不过这里的 full of energy 可以改为 energetic，变成 let me be energetic 也是可以的。

4）keep good shape 中少了 in 介词，应该改为 keep in good shape。keep good shape 中的 keep 变成了及物动词，good shape 为宾语，译为【保留/保存良好身材】，而 keep in good shape 中的 keep in 为动词短语，keep 为不及物动词，good shape 还是宾语，译为【保持良好身材】。keep in good shape 还可以改成更常用的 keep fit 短语。再来就是 let me keep in good shape 有点啰嗦了，可以简化为 keep me in good shape 或是 keep me fit 就可以了。

这个句子的确可以倒装，但只能做到部分倒装，而无法做到全部倒装。倒装时，需要把 not only 提到句首为：

Not only do these various kinds of activities make me feel relaxed, but also let me be full of energy and keep in good shape.

在 not only ... but also ... 的结构中，并列的通常需要在句中担当同样的成分，当有3个并列是，通常会把都两个放到 not only，而最后一个给 but also，变成：

Not only do these various kinds of activities make me feel relaxed and full of energy， but also keep me in good shape.

另外就是 not only ... but also ... 用的频率较高，可以考虑改成 not only ... but ... as well. 的结构，语意一样，但较少任用。

Not only do these various kinds of activities make me feel relaxed and full of energy， but keep me in good shape as well.

希望这样的解析可以帮到您。