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MyhobbyIfwithoutmusic,peoplecan'tliveverywellintheworld.Myhobbyislisteningtomusic.Ilo...
My hobby
If without music,people can't live very well in the world.My hobby is listening to music.I love Jay best.Jay is one of the most famous pop singers in China,and his music has individuality very much.When I rest after long-time study,listening to music can let me relaxed,and it also can lets me happy.
I like listening to music,I like my hobby.
When I rest after long-time study,listening to music can make me feel relaxed,and it also make me engergetic for next.
It's good for everybody to have his own hobby. 展开
If without music,people can't live very well in the world.My hobby is listening to music.I love Jay best.Jay is one of the most famous pop singers in China,and his music has individuality very much.When I rest after long-time study,listening to music can let me relaxed,and it also can lets me happy.
I like listening to music,I like my hobby.
When I rest after long-time study,listening to music can make me feel relaxed,and it also make me engergetic for next.
It's good for everybody to have his own hobby. 展开
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