Question

我有一篇英文的自我介绍，拜托大家帮我翻译一下，如有错误请大家给我提出来，谢谢

about me
Good judges! My name is Mao Jian Guo。 I was a lively boy, so I like to make friends. I too am a stubborn person, so I really like the motto: "I am the best I know, the best of my ability, and I mean is to continue to do so until the end," from Abraham Lincoln. I like English, because this is one of the most well-known language in the world. My dream is to go to the United States advanced. Therefore, in order to make the dream a reality, I will do my best!
All this, thank you!
上面的自我介绍是希望之星初赛的自我介绍 请大家帮我改好后，重新腾好，写下来。我追加100分

Answer 1

翻译:
关于我

好法官！我的名字是毛泽东郭建。我是一个活泼的男孩，所以我喜欢交朋友。我也是一个固执的人，所以我真的很喜欢的座右铭： “我尽我所知，尽我最大的能力，我的意思是要继续这样做，直到最后， ”从亚伯拉罕林肯。我喜欢英语，因为这是一个最有名的语言在世界上。我的梦想是去美国先进。因此，为了使梦想变成现实，我会尽我所能！

所有这一切，谢谢！

Answer 2

呃。。。暂且提提建议，仅作参考
首先，开头那句judges,作为名词，是法官的意思，是特殊语境要求么？如果是打招呼，直接说“hi,everyone就可以了，如果有特定的观看这个文章的对象，就直接写“my dearXXX"。
接着：1.lively一般不用来形容人，如果说某人很活跃，那用active就可以了
2.I后边不能跟too，too一般用在句末，用逗号隔开。如果想表达是个"固执己见的人”，stubborn有点严重，通常stubborn的人倔的很厉害。引用名言不能用冒号，在你的这篇介绍中应该把冒号删去，from前加个which来引导从句。
3.language应该为复数，因为是“许多广为人知的语言中的一种”。
4.表达“将来”不用advanced，而是in the future,如果要是想表达“要去先进的美国”（怎么觉得这么诡异）就直接把这个词提到the United States前就行
5.使梦想成真，make the dream to be true；
最后，应该用“that's all,thank you."结尾

Good xxx(按照时间来打招呼)everyone! My name is Mao Jian Guo。 I'm a active boy, so I like to make friends. I am a little stubborn so I really like the motto: "I am the best I know, the best of my ability, and I mean is to continue to do so until the end," which was said by Abraham Lincoln. I like English, because it is one of the most well-known languages in the world. My dream is to go to the United States in the future. Therefore, I will do my best to make the dream to be true! That's all, thank you!
说实话还是建议你咨询下你的英语老师，让他指导一下，然后多练习演讲，比如对着镜子练习表情等等，祝好运GOOD LUCK