Question

三篇英语短文改错，悬赏积分30分~

改错一：
Dear Tom,
I was glad to accept your letter of May 22th. (1.)
I don't expect that you would answer my letter so(2.)
soon.You suggested in your letter that I must read more.(3.)
I agree with you.It is true that one need to read a lot(4.)
to improve his reading ability.It is the same like(5.)
swimming.One can't learn to swim if he goes and(6.)
swims in the water.So this summer I am(7.)
going to get down to read some books.Although(8.)
I am not the kind person who always does things(9.)
according to his plan,but I will try my best.(10.)
Sincerely
Xiao Wei

改错二：
It was Sunday.I never get up early on
Sundays.I sonetimes stay in the bed until (1.)
lunch time.Last Sunday I get up very late.I(2.)
looked out in the window.It was dark outside.(3.)
"What a day!"I thought. "It's rain again."(4.)
Just then the telephone rang.It was mine aunt(5.)
Lucy."I've just arrived by train,"she side.(6.）
"I'm coming to see you.""And I'm still having（7.）
braskfast,"I said."What are you doing?"her asked（8.）
"I'm using breakfast,"I repeated."Dear me,"she said,（9.）
"Do you always get up such late?It's one o'clock! "（10.）

改错三：
My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice
drew others'attentions.Last year,sha left to study at a music(1.)
school.Yesterday sha called to say that she wants to see me but(2.)
not at my house.So we fixed a time and a place and then hung.(3.)
Today I met her at a given time and place,Greatly to my (4.)
surpise,I found her so much changing.She looked very(5.)
sorrowful and worrying.She said she had made(6.)
such little progress that she was almost hopeless of success.(7.)
She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time(8.)
diong nothing.I knew she just needed some encouragement.(9.)
So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.(10.)

Answer 1

楼上的都没有改完啊！

该错一：
1. accept→receive
2. don't→didn't
3. must→should或去掉must
4. need→needs
5. like→as
6. if→unless(或can't→can)
7. √
8. read→reading
9. kind和person中间加上of
10. 去掉but

该错二
1. 去掉the
2. get→got
3. in→through
4. rain→raining
5. mine→my
6. √
7. And→But
8. her→she
9. using→having
10. such→so

该错三
1. attentions→attention
2. wants→wanted
3. hung后面加上up
4. a→the
5. changing→changed
6. worrying→worried
7. such→so
8. 去掉that
9. √
10. could和persuade中间加上to

Answer 2

大概是这样:
一
Dear Tom,
I was glad to accept your letter of May 22th. (1.) accept——recieve
I don't expect that you would answer my letter so(2.) don't--didin`t
soon.You suggested in your letter that I must read more.(3.) your last letter
I agree with you.It is true that one need to read a lot(4.) with--to
to improve his reading ability.It is the same like(5.) It --that
swimming.One can't learn to swim if he goes and(6.) if--untill
swims in the water.So this summer I am(7.) the去掉
going to get down to read some books.Although(8.) get--go
I am not the kind person who always does things(9.) kind of person
according to his plan,but I will try my best.(10.) his --your
Sincerely
Xiao Wei

二：
It was Sunday.I never get up early on
Sundays.I sonetimes stay in the bed until (1.) sonetimes--always
lunch time.Last Sunday I get up very late.I(2.) get--got
looked out in the window.It was dark outside.(3.) in--through
"What a day!"I thought. "It's rain again."(4.) It's --It'll
Just then the telephone rang.It was mine aunt(5.) mine--my
Lucy."I've just arrived by train,"she side.(6.）side--said
"I'm coming to see you.""And I'm still having（7.） coming--going
braskfast,"I said."What are you doing?"her asked（8.） 对
"I'm using breakfast,"I repeated."Dear me,"she said,（9.）using--having
"Do you always get up such late?It's one o'clock! "（10.）such --so

三：
My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice
drew others'attentions.Last year,sha left to study at a music(1.)
school.Yesterday sha called to say that she wants to see me but(2.)
not at my house.So we fixed a time and a place and then hung.(3.)
Today I met her at a given time and place,Greatly to my (4.)
surpise,I found her so much changing.She looked very(5.)
sorrowful and worrying.She said she had made(6.)
such little progress that she was almost hopeless of success.(7.)
She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time(8.)
diong nothing.I knew she just needed some encouragement.(9.)
So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.(10.)

Answer 3

Dear Tom,
I was glad to accept your letter of May 22th. (1.) accept——recieve
I don't expect that you would answer my letter so(2.) don't--didin`t
soon.You suggested in your letter that I must read more.(3.) your last letter
I agree with you.It is true that one need to read a lot(4.) with--to
to improve his reading ability.It is the same like(5.) It --that
swimming.One can't learn to swim if he goes and(6.) if--untill
swims in the water.So this summer I am(7.) the去掉
going to get down to read some books.Although(8.) get--go
I am not the kind person who always does things(9.) kind of person
according to his plan,but I will try my best.(10.) his --your
Sincerely
Xiao Wei

改错二：
It was Sunday.I never get up early on
Sundays.I sonetimes stay in the bed until (1.) sonetimes--always
lunch time.Last Sunday I get up very late.I(2.) get--got
looked out in the window.It was dark outside.(3.) in--through
"What a day!"I thought. "It's rain again."(4.) It's --It'll
Just then the telephone rang.It was mine aunt(5.) mine--my
Lucy."I've just arrived by train,"she side.(6.）side--said
"I'm coming to see you.""And I'm still having（7.） coming--going
braskfast,"I said."What are you doing?"her asked（8.） 对
"I'm using breakfast,"I repeated."Dear me,"she said,（9.）using--having
"Do you always get up such late?It's one o'clock! "（10.）such --so

改错三：
My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice
drew others'attentions.Last year,sha left to study at a music(1.)
school.Yesterday sha called to say that she wants to see me but(2.)
not at my house.So we fixed a time and a place and then hung.(3.)
Today I met her at a given time and place,Greatly to my (4.)
surpise,I found her so much changing.She looked very(5.)
sorrowful and worrying.She said she had made(6.)
such little progress that she was almost hopeless of success.(7.)
She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time(8.)
diong nothing.I knew she just needed some encouragement.(9.)
So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.(10.)