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part2 请帮我改一下我的句子语法 附上我的中文翻译 希望可以帮我修改的通顺 谢谢

请帮我改一下我的英语句子语法 附上我的中文翻译 若有不通顺 奇怪的地方 希望可以帮我修改的通顺 谢谢拜托了以下

2. 因为他的不信任感 不断监视著他的老婆 造成他跟他老婆之间的冲突裂痕
也因为这样 造成他的老婆很恐惧 而不小心失手开了枪
在故事後面 和妻子争吵过後 这位律师一个人开著车去山丘上思考 有反悔 悔悟过 但後来还是因为误会
所以还是造成悲剧的发生 他的妻子因为害怕所以失手开了枪 在律师要死的时候 他们之间的冲突误会完全不见了
这位律师祈求他的妻子的原谅

because of this lawer's distrust, he don't believe his wife,
he alway think that his wife will betray him, so he keeps watch his wife everyday and every moments
because of that, cause this lawer and his wife a big conflict between them
at the amost end of the story , after they fighting , this lawer driving a car to a hill,
he think a lots, he's regret that what he did to his wife, he want applogize to his wife,
but because of the misunderstood again, so cause the tragedy happen at the end.

3. 这位律师主角就像一颗不定时炸弹一样 会不定时爆炸 因为他的不信任感和自卑
而在这篇故事当中 引爆这颗炸弹爆炸点的是 他听到和看见他的老婆快乐的和一个年轻小夥子的对话讲话
和後来在快结尾当中 他以为他老婆在跟一个男人在一起 所以他又鬼鬼祟祟的监视著他老婆 导致她的老婆非常害怕而失手开了枪
故事因为这位律师对年轻的妻子缺乏信任感 这种信任感带给他妻子许多不快乐并导致悲剧的发生
如果这位律师可以多信任一点他的妻子 我想他的妻子也会更快乐 更爱他 更不会造成悲剧的发生了

the main character, this lawer, He's like a walking bomb that could explode anytime, because of his distrust and humble.
in the story. 引爆这颗炸弹爆炸点的是 that this lawer see and hear accidently that his wife happyily have a conversation with a young guy
and also, he thought his wife is staying with a man , so he is watching and spy on his wife agian, this caused that his wife feel fears
so that wife shooting him.

well, i believe that if this lawer could be more trust on his wife, i think his wife will be more happy and love to be together with him,
and will not cause the tragedy happen in the story.

Answer 1

The distrust the lawyer has of his wife and his constant monitoring of her behavior caused conflicts and tensions to arise between the couple. Later in the story, after an argument with his wife, the lawyer drove up the hill to reflect on his actions. He felt regretful and remorseful. Nevertheless, afterwards, tragedy still struck because of a misunderstanding. The wife, in fear of her husband, pulled the trigger of a gun during their fight. It was only when he was at the brink of death did their conflicts finally resolve and he beg for her forgiveness.

The main character is like a walking time bomb which can explode at any moment, because of the deep distrust he has of his wife and his inferiority complex. Near the end of the story, he was upset that his wife had a pleasant conversation with a younger man. He even thought that she was having an affair, and spied on her actions. His wife was afraid of him and shot him accidentally.

I believe that if the lawyer had trusted his wife more, and not let petty affairs affect his judgement, they will still be living blissfully together.

其实，我觉得这个读后感本身就写的不好，即使翻译的通顺也不怎么样。

追问

这不是读後感 我这是在回答我们老师给的问题.....

追答

那说实在的，答得不怎么样。请别放心上。主要是2，重复很多，而且重点不在他老婆开了枪，而是她开枪射中了他。

追问

你有读过这篇故事?

追答

没有，推断的。

Answer 2

晕死了

这么多!

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Answer 3

His distrust and continuous spying on led to a fundamental conflict between them which caused the increasing fear of her wife and her accidental shooting at him. Despite that, as described at the end of the story, the lawyer, after they fighting, had driven a car alone to a hill, making introspection and repentance, it still happened the tragedy because of the misunderstanding between them in which his wife shot at him out of fear. As he is dying, it seemed that the conflict and misunderstanding between them disappeared completely, and he impetrated her forgiveness.

Being the major character in the story, the lawyer is like an untimed bomb which may explode anytime because of his distrust and self-abasement. The detonation point, as depicted in the story, is the extreme fear of his wife arising from his distrust as he thought she is having an affair with a young man when he saw her talking happily with the young man, and his subsequent spying on her, which ended up with her accidental shooting at him by mistake.

This story tells us that it is the distrust and misunderstanding of the lawyer which lead to the displeasure and extreme fear of his wife, and cause the tragedy in the end. Should the lawyer had a bit more trust in his wife, she would be much happier and would love him more in return, and the tragedy would have not happened anyway.

Answer 4

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