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英语高手，请进...帮忙翻译一小段话...

请将下面的话翻译成英文，急用，谢谢啦，好的话全部分追加...HOHO.

回顾改革历程，探索成功人生，规划大学征程。在经历了10天的“记者”生活后，对10位成功人士如何成功进行了走访调查，掌握了大量的第一手资料，汇集了他们的思想精华，体验了他们的奋斗历程，分享了他们的成功喜悦。他们都是土生土长的榆林人，在这片曾经的不毛之地上，他们为家乡，为人民，做出了自己的杰出贡献，也得到了广大人民群众的认可，也让实践者得到了良好的锻炼，懂得了什么才是自己应该负有的责任，什么才是如今社会所需要的。明白了成功不是凭空得来的，而是经过了不断的学习，磨练和实践，才造就了一位位表面上光鲜亮丽，实际上背后有多少辛酸泪水的成功人士，在这里负责任的告诉大家，成功人士都能把握住人生中哪怕是及其微小的机会，但是我们要有把握机会的能力。

Answer 1

这种特CCTV的话最难翻译。如果你的读者是中国人也就罢了。如果读者是英语人事，要怎么样让他们能理解，得费番功夫。

To review the reformation process, to explore a successful career and to plan the university life is the main topic for this activity. (1) After 10 days journalist life, students (2) had gained the first hand data for 10 successful personages, learned the essential part of their thoughts, experienced their struggles and shared their success gratification. Those successful people were all born and grew in Yulin. In this aridity land, they have dedicated themselves to their homeland and people onto it. They made such extraordinary contributions so that they received high praise from everyone. In this 10 days, students strengthened themselves practically, understood their responsibilities and the requirement of the society. (3)Those students (4) also understood that success comes only after continuous studying, practice and struggle, and never comes without any effort. Like those bright successful people, their success today is absolutely based on their effort full of tear and sweat. All the successful person can seize every tiny opportunity in their life. However they need work hard to obtain the ability to seize.

1, 回顾改革历程，探索成功人生，规划大学征程。这三句短语在这里很突兀，是标题吗？还是口号？还是应该置于句中说明一下吧.
2, 这里一定要加主语。中文部分这里都是病句。
3, 中文的段落中就有这问题：他们都是土生土长的榆林人……什么才是如今社会所需要的。
这里句子太长，而且从“也让实践者……”开始，主语都变成“实践者”了，而不是前面的“成功人士”。翻译的时候应该把主语明确。
4, 这里问题是一样的，主语是什么？ 是“经历了10天的“记者”生活”的实践者

Answer 2

The retrospect reforms course , probes successful life , plans a university journey. Behind the "reporter" life having experienced 10 day, how successfully to have been in progress to successful 10 personages interviewing investigation , have grasped large amount of firsthand data, their thought cream having assembled , the course having experienced their struggling, the success having shared them is delightful. They all are autochthonous Yu Lin City people, in this piece once they are a hometown , are the people on the desert region,have made self brilliant contribution out, the ratification having also got the broad masses of the people, has also let a practitioner get fine taking exercise , what having understood is really self ought to assume some responsibility , what is really be now what society needs. Having known success is not baseless De Lai's, but is to ceaseless study about have passed , to have tempered and have put into practice, have brought up places just now superficial brightness is bright beautiful , successful personage having bitter tear of number in fact at the back, in telling assuming responsibility for here everybody, the successful personage all can firmly grasp life middle even though being a chance and their , we want but sure chance ability.

Answer 3

Recalling the course of reform, and explore to succeed in life, planning the University of the journey. After 10 days of the "Journalist" Living After 10 successful people how to successfully investigate visited, is in control of a large number of first-hand information, bringing together the essence of their thought and experience of their struggle to share their the success of pleasure. They are a native of Yulin people, in this once barren land on the their homeland for the people, and made outstanding contributions to their own, has also been recognized by the masses, but also allow practitioners to be a good exercise know what should be their own responsibility, what is now required by the community. Understand that the success can not come out of thin air, but through constant study, practice and practice, we created a digital surface glamorous, in fact how many bitter tears behind the successful people here tell a responsible U.S. successfully are able to grasp life and are tiny even the opportunity, but we have the ability to grasp the opportunity. 相信我啊

Answer 4

Reviewing the course of reform , exploring the life of success , designing the journey of collage days . Through revealed the way to success by interviewed 10 achievers in 10 days of correspondent life , we got plenty of their fresh information , collected their essences of thoughts , realized their experience of struggle , shared their joys of success . The person who born and raised in Yulin are adored by local people because of their outstanding contributions for their hometown and the people . They offer the experience which let practitioners know what should be their own responsibility and what is now required for society , it make them plain that success not come from abstract notion but only by unremitting study and practice to steel themselves into achievers who have a brilliant exteriors but tears and hardships behind . Here in conscience to say that achievers could grasp opportunities which appear in their life even if are awfully small , and we should cultivate ability of catching opportunities .

完全手工翻译，译文很精彩，放心使用