Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instru...

GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstruct... Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)。 展开
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Possible version 1
Dear Sir or Madam:
I have heard from the newspaper that you, the Shanghai Museum, are planning to organize a famous painting exhibition. And you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or the art gallery. I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum. My reasons are as follows.
In terms of convenience, the museum has more advantages over the gallery. First, it is located in the People’s Square, which is the center of the city. So people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1, 2 and 8, which are available to people from nearly every district. It saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble of traffic jam. Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country. After all the Shanghai Museum is a landmark of our city familiar to nearly every Chinese.
With regard to the professional function, though it seems natural that an art exhibition be set in the gallery, in a more general sense, I think the museum has more advanced facilities to make the exhibition successful and to preserve the paintings well. As we know, the museum has successfully held many national and international exhibitions and its advertising and organizing experience is of no match; also its staff is qualified and professional.
To sum up, I am sure the show will be fantastic if it is held in Shanghai Museum.
(248 words)
Possible version 2
To whom it may concern:
I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.
In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.
On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.
Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.
Wang Min

这是一篇话题作文,就上海博物馆的展出场所做出自己的判断,并表达出自己的理由。内容比较贴近生活,具有时代性和真实性。因为给出的只是框架性的提示和要求,所以需要考生在写作的时候要根据实际情况,结合所学知识补全文章所需的各项内容。其中,文章需要包括的内容主要有,写信的目的、场所的选择、你的理由(便利性和专业性等方面)。在写作的过程中,除了注意词汇、句型等的正确使用以外,还要做到言之有理,言之有据。同时,多样的句式结构和适当的连词的使用,也会使文章读起来更加的流畅和自然。总体难度不大。
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