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假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式与初中有很大的不同。你给自己的英语老师写了一

假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式与初中有很大的不同。你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。【写作内容】1、开始学习高中英语时，觉得英语比以前要难得多，几乎丧失信心；2、后来逐渐意识到英语的重要性；3、每天努力学习英语，例如多读书，多背诵等；4、向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法；5、正是他们的帮助和您的鼓励使我提高了英语水平，现在对英语越来越感兴趣。【写作要求】1、字数在80—100；2、参考词汇：①高中英语：senior English；②丧失信心：lose heart；③意识到：realize；④背诵：recite； ⑤鼓励：encouragementDear Mr. Li,I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________Thank you so much for your great help.Wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua

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Dear Mr. Li, I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, so I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting as often as possible. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English. And now I’m getting more and more interested in it. Thank you so much for your great help. Wish you all the best.

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，提纲类作文的要点都在文章提示中给了出来。对考生的思维要求较低，只需要简单翻译即可，使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接起来，成为一个整体。要注意语法结构和词汇方面的准确性，宾语出现中国式英语，尤其要注意句子结构。 点评：提纲类短文关键是在于抓文章的要点，要把所有的要点都涵盖。用合适的连接词连接，注意语法结构和高级词汇的运用。