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最近你班将举行一场题为 Life in the future 的讨论会， 请根据以下要点， 写一篇一百词左右的短文。1.

最近你班将举行一场题为 Life in the future 的讨论会， 请根据以下要点， 写一篇一百词左右的短文。1. 随着医学的发展，人类的平均寿命将会达到120岁。2. 由于新能源的出现，污染问题将得到控制。3. 人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化。 如机器人可以为你做家务；椅子的颜色能够随着你所穿的衣服而改变；手机可以带在手腕上， 通话时可以看到对方；可以乘坐新型的电梯进入太空度假。（手腕 wrist 电梯 elevator）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

As time goes on, life in the future will be very different from that of today. First, with the development of medicine, people will live to the age of 120 or so on the average. Second, because of the discovery of new energy, the environmental pollution will be under control. Third, people’s daily life will change greatly, as well. For example, robots will do all your housework for you; your chair will change its color to match what you’re wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while talking; you can even take a new type of elevator into space for your holidays. In a word, we are looking forward to an exactly new world in the future.

试题分析：题目要求根据讨论会的结果写一篇短文。写作要点已经列出，但不能简单的照着翻译，应该有所展开，多使用高级词汇和重要句型以及语法知识，像定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句、倒装等。另外，注意人、时态、拼写和标点的正确使用。 【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的短语As time goes on, different from, with the development of medicine,on the average, because of, under control, as well, For example, In a word, looking forward to等，使作文内容充实，增强了作文的丰富性；范文使用了First, Second, Third来进行列举，条理分明；范文还使用了宾语从句what you’re wearing；非谓语动词while talking。