Question

请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下我的写作：“I am very sorry to bother you, I me。。。”

（我的英文现在确实是真的不怎么样，如果你不明白我做写的句子，请至少帮我把明显的语法错误修正一下。谢谢）

I am very sorry to bother you, I met some problem recently, and my classmate think maybe I could contact you and ask some help. That's why I write this letter to you.

Last semester, after I kept went to see the counselor, I got a "special consideration" which proved my condition could affect my exam result, and then unfortunate, I failed the subject "XXX". After I wrote lots of email to Professor XXX who is the coordinator of this subject. I still think maybe Professor XXX didn't consider my "special consideration" totally, since The subject outline mentioned that student must gain a minimum of 40% of final exam which means 20/50 and I got 18/50, actually I am quite shame I did a such terrible job on my exam, but I think my "special consideration" which proved my condition is "very severely affected" my study, maybe it was possible let me pass this subject if my "special consideration" been considered.

Answer 1

I am very sorry to bother you, but I have encountered some problems recently. I think it might be the best to ask for your help.
Last semester, after I kept seeing the counselor, I got a "special consideration" which proved that my condition could affect my exam result. Unfortunately, however, I failed "XXX" (use course name/code directly here). I wrote a number of emails explaining the situation to Professor XXX who is the coordinator of this course, but I think he may still did not (在比较正式的书面文件里避免使用缩写) take my "special consideration" into account. According to the subject outline, students must score a minimum of 40% on the final exam which means 20/50. I got 18/50, which made me felt terrible. In the meantime, however, I believe I have the potential do better than this as my condition had "severely affected" my study. I think maybe it is possible to pass this course if my "special consideration" has been considered.