Question

英语短文改错求解？

如图，一增加一删除 八修改。老师发的练习题。有部分没有拍完整。能做的请英语大神帮忙做一下！

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Answer 1

行1：travel 改为 traveling ; arrived 后加 in 行2：and 改为 but 行3：删除bus前的the 行4：the symbol 改为 a symbol 行5：which 改为 where 行6：we改为 I ; to me 改为on me 行7：excited 改为 exciting

追答

由于文章左边有不少地方未拍出来，只找到九处错误。但可以保证这九处改得正确。

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谢谢采纳

Answer 2

I had a great time TRAVELLING around Shanghai
We arrived IN Shanghai.
not only a world famous modern city, BUT also.......
FIRSTLY（更好）, we TOURED around the city by THE 删掉bus. （此处没拍全，假设你们没专车巴士）
ENJOYED the beautiful cityscrape
WHERE I saw a lot of cartoon characters,
we felt like PRINCESSES
deep impression ON me
this EXCITING trip
仅供参考，未必正确

Answer 3

这个有些不完整，可以把整篇都拍上吗😊

追问

拍不了啦不在学校 看得到的能看一下嘛