Question

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例文：
Write a short composition about “Saving animals” in three paragraphs.
You are given the opening sentence of each paragraph. The composition should be about 100 words.
（作文：每一段的第一句话已经给出，根据第一句话来确定此段的内容。）

Saving animals
There is an undeniable fact that the number of animals is declining faster than everbefore. （动物的数量在迅速减少）According to a ecent survey made by soe experts, about 37 speies disappear from our arth every year. It is that the problem has become a serious one worth our concern.（可以用举例的方式，说明或解释首句）
When we explore this problem, some underlying factors emerge. （分析这一现象的原因）In the very first place, human beings have played a big part. With the fast development of human society, the environment is much destroyed, and animals lose their home. Accordingly, some species become extinct. What’s more, people hunt animals for food and skin. A good case in point is that the Japanese have killed a lot of whales because they like to eat the meat. In addition, human beings are largely responsible for the pollution of natural environment, and poison animals in many ways.（可以采取“首先”，“其次”，“再次”这样的逻辑结构来构思文章框架）
The current problem, I believe, should be solved immediately.（如何来解决这一问题） First of all, our government should play a key role in making relevant rules and protecting animals. The general public should also be educated to value the existence of these animals on our planet.

Protection of Environment
Today the problem of environment has become more and more important. （环境问题越来越重要）The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowed. We are using up our natural resources too quickly and at the same time we are polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, human life on earth will not survive.
Man has made great progress in environment protection. （人们在环境保护方面所取得的成绩）Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop the environment pollution.（举例：政府如何做？我们如何做？等）
Still more measures should be taken to solve the problem. （还应采取什么措施？）People should be further educated to realize the importance of the problem, to use modern methods of birth control and recycle our natural resources. We are sure that we shall have a better and cleaner planet in the future.

举例的短语：
for instance, for example, a good case in point，as an illustration, in particular
表逻辑：
for one thing, for another, furthermore, in addition, moreover, what’s more, then
first, second, third, last

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帮我个忙哈。。不要太长。。和例文差不多长就行。。。
也不要太难哦。。尽量用简单的单词。。谢谢。。。
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速度。。。

Answer 1

Nowadays, with the improvement of the people’s living standard, some people form a habit of raising small or domestic animals as pets. Some raise small dogs or cats as their pets while others raise various birds or fishes as their pets. There are still even some people raising snakes and other unusual animals as their pets. Does anyone have the same opinion of raising animals as pets? No, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right to live a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals as pets have a negative influence on the surroundings such as dogs’ barking at midnight, dogs’ chasing people on the street and so on. What’s more, some animals will transmit some diseases. In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise animals at pets. Animals have their own right to lead a life as they like. We should not deprive them of their natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.

Answer 2

Memory some good sentence structures can improve your English.
You can write English diary ,too.It's very useful On the other hand, the way people raise animals as pets have a negative influence on the surroundings such as dogs’ barking at midnight, dogs’ chasing people on the street and so on. What’s more, some animals will transmit some diseases. In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise animals at pets. Animals have their own right to lead a life as they like. We should not deprive them of their natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.