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英语高手进来帮忙~~~~~急（翻译）

本网站建设的目的主要在于介绍奥运会的基本宗旨、古现代奥运基本比赛项目及规则、历届奥运会举办城市等知识,着重介绍2008奥运。从奥运历史、奥运精神、奥运人物、夺金时刻、百年圆梦、铸就辉煌等几个方面介绍国人承办奥运会的艰辛历程。2008年奥运会是对我国综合国力的一次综合检阅。成功举办2008年奥运会将促进我国群众体育与竞技体育的全面发展，促使中国成为真正的体育强国；进一步提高我国的国际地位；进一步促进中华民族的伟大历史复兴进程。
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翻译这段话 注意：不要在翻译网上翻译，那样翻译的语句不通顺，我也在那上面翻译过老师说不合格，郁闷！！！所以请英语大师帮帮忙！小弟先谢过了！ 80的悬赏！ 请认真翻译！如果过关再追加分数~~~
说的是80 悬赏，点成100了~~~~ 不过能给我翻译OK的！我还会追加····

Answer 1

本网站建设的目的主要在于介绍奥运会的基本宗旨、古现代奥运基本比赛项目及规则、历届奥运会举办城市等知识,着重介绍2008奥运。The goal of our website is to introduce the purpose of the Olympics. the basic events and rules of antient and modern Olympics and the host cities in the history, and the emphasis of it is the 2008 Olympics. 从奥运历史、奥运精神、奥运人物、夺金时刻、百年圆梦、铸就辉煌等几个方面介绍国人承办奥运会的艰辛历程。We will view the hard way along which the Chinese hosted it from the aspects of history, spirit, persons, gold moments, dream realizing and splendid constructing.2008年奥运会是对我国综合国力的一次综合检阅。It is a test of the comprehensive force of China.成功举办2008年奥运会将促进我国群众体育与竞技体育的全面发展，促使中国成为真正的体育强国；进一步提高我国的国际地位；进一步促进中华民族的伟大历史复兴进程。The success of the Olympics will contributes to the development of both mass sports and competive sports, and help China to be a real sports power. It will also enhance the international status of China and devote to the process of the great rebirth of Chinese people.

Answer 2

The purpose of this website is to provide information on the Olympic games, such as its vision, the main areas of competition and rules for both the ancient and modern Olympics, as well as past host cities, emphasis will be placed on the 2008 Olympics. Through the history of the Olympics, the Olympic spirit, famous Olympics athletes, their winning moments, the fulfillment of a century-year-old dream and the making of a legend, we will present the ardous journey the Chinese have gone through to host the Olympic games. The 2008 Olympics is an assessment on our country's overall strength. Successfully hosting the 2008 Olympics will encourage the holistic development of public and competitive sports in our country, and make China a real sports nation, this not only further increases our global status, but also promotes the revival of the great culture of the Chinese people.

Answer 3

我来帮你了：

This website is aimed to introduce the relevant knowledge of Olympic Games, including the basis principles, ancient and modern sports events, host cities for previous Olympics etc. And mainly introduces the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing. We presents the challenging process of hosting the game from various aspects of Olympic History, Olympic Spirits, Olympic Characters, Victory Moments, Century Dreams, Successful Magnificence. 2008 Olympic Games was a comprehensive inspection for the overall national strengths of China. The success in hosting this will definitely promote the through development in both leisure and competitive sports of China and develop China as a real sport power. It will also enhance the international reputation and accelerate the process of national unity of China.

这一篇翻译我自己比较满意,觉得是今天翻译的众多东西中最顺的一篇.中间有几个东西稍微说一下:

从奥运历史、奥运精神、奥运人物、夺金时刻、百年圆梦、铸就辉煌等几个方面
这里我想应该是网站中的几个主题,所以我翻译成Olympic History, Olympic spirits, Olympic Characters, Victory moments, Century Dreams, Successful Magnificence这几个专有名词形式的,以大写字母开头的短语.

最后一句的“历史复兴进程”我本来翻译成the process of historical restore of China. 后来觉得不是很符合英语习惯，于是我改成了the process of national unity of China. 统一大业， 你看怎么样。

Answer 4

The purpose of building this website is to introduce the main basic purpose of the Olympic Games, ancient and modern Olympic Games the basic rules of the Olympic Games host city, such as knowledge, focuses on the 2008 Olympic Games. From the Olympic history, the Olympic spirit, the Olympic figure in gold at all times, a hundred years of dreams, such as some aspects of Brilliantness introduce Chinese history and the pain Olympics. 2008 Olympic Games are on China's comprehensive national strength of a comprehensive review. Successfully hosting the 2008 Olympic Games will promote sport and our country the masses of all-round development of competitive sports, prompted China to become a real power in Sport; further enhance our country's international status; to further promote the Chinese nation's great history of the recovery process.