Question

请高手帮我指点一下这两篇英语作文的错误!!!谢谢,非常感谢!!!

(1) International Working Women's Day
Spring is coming,The weather gets warmer.The birds are singing in the tree.The flowers are growing. and the sunshine is enough.What beautiful it is!
Today is the women's festival.In the morning,my friends and I go to play in the Huishan Mountain.we happiness to climb the mountain.we take sun bath in the special day. In the afternoon,we take some photoes.we're in the cheer sounds for one day.
It's a nice day today. If I have a chance I will go there again.

(2) My friend
I have some friends.but good friend is only two.Yang Yi is one of them.she is a waitress in a club. she works hard and her depasit some momeny.she loves momeny.momeny can take her happy.
From August 2007 to Febraruay 2009 she has changed.she brings some momeny to her boy friend to spend. Nothing can be surpring! Maybe she falls in love.
"she was deceited some momeny by her boy friend".she told me.
I worried with her when I know this things.she finding some way to solving the important things,now.
I hope she can success.

Answer 1

(1)中的“The birds are singing in the tree.”的“in the tree.”应是“on the tree”；“we happiness to climb the mountain.” 的“we”后面应该加“are”.

Answer 2

第一个时态应为过去时..
你整个用的就是一般现在时的..