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英语高手们、帮帮我吧，谢谢

麻烦帮我检查下这个自我介绍有什么语病、和措辞正确与否，谢谢，是去参加自主招生面试用的，谢谢，

I'm very delighted to be here. my name is xx . I come from xx0,where is a beatiful place .I'm easy-going. I do well in my studies .and I always try my best to help others as a （志愿者，汗，不会说了，）I appreciate you give me this chance . I'll value the chance and show my abilty in the futuru.（最后还需要加个Thank you吗？）

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I'm very delighted to be here. My name is xx . I came from xx0, which is a beatiful place. I'm easy-going. I am doing well in my studies, and I often try my best to help others as a volunteer. I appreciate you give me this chance. I'll value the chance and show my capability in the future. Thank you for the interview.

志愿者：volunteer