Question

帮我修改一下英语演讲稿

First of all I think that it is most important to be grateful for being able to live healthily. Many people who may have many difficulties in their lives and may give up their lives and commit suicide because of that. However it is actually very fortunate to have a healthy mind and body. There are countless people in the world who are sick and in pain or having family members who are sick and in pain, which then in comparison, having a healthy body is so fortunate. Also I am always grateful for having a good family. I have got parents who love me very much and do everything that is good for me.They are the people who have known me for the longest time and always offer me support，confidence and safety. After that I also think that I am very fortunate to have good and nice people around me.My classmates, friends, teachers are all people who are trustworthy and always treat me so nice that I think they are treating me like their own family members.
Actually there must be many things to be grateful for in everyone's life.However，I think that we shall all be grateful for the same thing,that we are all able to live in such a beautiful world!

帮我润色，改语法错误，最好可以用上一些高级句式...

Answer 1

First of all, I think that the first important thing for us to appreciate is we still live in health. Presently, more and more people tend to commit suicide for the difficulties they come across even if they are in perfect health. There are numerous people in the world who themselves or their family members are sick and in pain. Then we can find that having a healthy body is so lucky.
Secondly, I am always appriciating a good family. My parents love me very much and wish to do everything beneficial to me.They are the ones who understand me very much and always give me their support，their belief and their protection.
At last, I think I am really fortunate to have so many good and nice guys around me.My classmates, friends, teachers are all trustworthy. They treat me so well that I cannot help thinking that I am treated as one of their own family members.
Actually, there are many things that we can appreciate in our life.But at least one thing, I think, is what all of us could be grateful, which is we are now living in such a beautiful world!

唉。。。只能改到此了，不知所云，下次还不如直接放中文，翻起来快点，这玩意，，，百年难得一见的天书。估计是翻译机器的杰作！！Ugly!!

Answer 2

First of all, I believe it is most important to be grateful for being able to live healthily. It is because people may have many difficulties in their lives that results in giving up their lives by committing suicide. Indeed it should be very fortunate to have a healthy mind and body. There are countless people in the world who are sick and in pain or having family members who are sick and in pain, which then in comparison, having a healthy body is so fortunate. Also I am always grateful for having a good family. I have parents who love me very much and do everything that is good for me.They are the people who have known me for the longest time and always offered me support，confidence and safety. After that I also think that I am very fortunate to have nice people around me. My classmates, friends and teachers are all trustworthy and always treat me so nice that I think they are treating me like their own family member.

Actually there must be many things to be appreciated in everyone's life. However，I think that people should all be grateful for living in such a beautiful world!