Question

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我轻轻摸著 乱了头发
不要再问我 你还好吗
倦鸟飞晚霞 孤独回家
没有人看见路边花
枫叶片片的落下 染红天边的彩霞
痴痴的望著远远的地方
人在茫茫的天涯回忆渐渐融化
我想你已经忘记了谁在牵挂
云掀开面纱 半遮半掩的月
我看见它正在流泪
若说不想他事害怕难过吧
这就是爱的代价

枫叶片片的落下 染红天边的彩霞
这些年你过得好吗
若说这是个惩罚 这辈子别想啦
至少在梦里让我跟你说句话
你还会记得我吗 记得我吗 我还在这里
你知道我在等吗 还在等吗 好想你
你还会记得我吗 记得我吗 我还是你的

我终於看见你了 看见你了别再离去

翻译成英语，不要电脑翻译

Answer 1

Lightly I smoothed down my wild hair
wanting no more greetings from you.
Flying by the afterglow
was a homecoming bird of weariness.
Tiny flowers by the road
were all neglected by passers-by.
Falling and falling of maple leaves
reached the evening sky in red lights.
Fixing and fixing my gaze upon that remote place
memories faded into the deepening shades of dusk.
My solicitude for you might have sank into oblivion,
since weeping was the moon half hidden by clouds.
If fears of grief hold back my yearning,
I guess that was the price of love.

Falling and falling of maple leaves
reached the evening sky in red lights.
How have you been these years?
If never meeting you again happens as a punishment,
let my words find you in my dreams.
Do you still keep me in your heart? I am still here.
Do you know I am still waiting? I miss you.
Do you still keep me in your heart? I am still yours.

Finally I see you. Stay with me. Forever.

其中有些地方：(重复出现的词或意象，被我替换掉了) (意义引申非曲解)(尝试新的词汇)(尝试意义转接)（尝试不用太俗的句式和词语--!）（尝试元素活用）

满喜欢的。
可惜，
物是人非破镜难圆。
当然碰到奇迹的人是有的，恭喜了！！
得不得分没关系
希望主人可以品透我的译句~.~

Answer 2

I lightly touched, my unkemped hair
Don't ever ask me, how am I doing
A tired bird flying into the sunset, back to her lonely nest
No one ever seen the flowers, by the street
Mapple leaves falling, made the clouds of skyline red
I watched over the long distance, how silly
Remembrance that fades away over the skyline
I think you have forgotten who ever cared
The clouds opens their shaw, half covered by the moon.
I saw it's weeping
It's probably not because it's sad over something else
This is the price of love

Mapple leaves falling, made the clouds of skyline red
How are you over these years
If that's punishment, don't ever think about it in this life
At least let me tell you in your dreams
Will you remember me, remember me that I'm still here
Do you know I'm still waiting, still waiting and miss you
Will you remember me, remember me that that I'm yours

I finally see you, and when I see you, please don't ever go away.

手工翻译的，希望你喜欢。

Answer 3

I tumbled hair gently touched
Don't ask me. Are you okay
The birds fly home sunset alone
No one saw the flowers
The fall red maple patches of rosy clouds
Stupid looked at far place
People in the boundless tianya memories gradually melting
I think you've forgotten who CARES in
Cloud uncovered a veil of half attack by surprise
I saw it was in tears
If you don't want him afraid sad
This is love

The fall red maple patches of rosy clouds
Have you had
If the said it was a penalty in this life, don't want to
At least in the dream, let me talk to you
Do you still remember me? Remember me? I was here
You know I am waiting for you still waiting for? Good
Do you still remember me? Remember me? You or me

I finally saw you saw you don't leave

Answer 4

I gently touched, hair trouble!
Not to ask me, how are you?
Tired bird flying at sunset, go home lonely.
No one at the roadside to see the flower.
Maple Leaf in the movie Down, red horizon of Caixia.
It is solely at the far of places.
People in the vast expanse of the earth gradually melting memories.
I think you have forgotten who is concerned about.
Cloud lifted the veil, half cover half of the month again.
I saw it was in tears.
If he is afraid that it did not want you sad!
This is the price of love!

Maple Leaf's movie Down, red horizon of Caixia.
How are you all these years it?
If this is a punishment in this life should not even think about it!
At least in the dream, let me tell you a word!
You will remember me? Remember me? I am still here!
You know that I wait? Still wait?好想~ ~ ~ you!
You will remember me? Remember me? Of me or you!

I finally saw you! See you do not leave!