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Answer 1

Based on a study recently conducted by CCTV, a staggering 36.5 percent of animals are on the verge of extinction across the globe. From a subjective perspective, two critical factors are contributors of this phenomenon. One would be legal hunting or illegal poaching of animals for exotic meat, fur or feathers. Another would be the environmental changes due to human activities.

Answer 2

According to a recent survey conducted / carried out by CCTV，a high proportion of 36.5%of animals that around the world are on the edge / verge of extinction.
From my perspective，there are two critical factors accounting for such phenomenon.
To begin with，animals are hunted hugely for their meat and fur / feather.
Moreover， there are drastic changes in climate.Many animals will not be able to survive the changed condition.As a result，they will face the problem of extinction.

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