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I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that s...

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened both at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

Answer 1

小题1:about改为with  小题2:holds后面加the  小题3:fully改为full   小题4:me改为her   小题5:unable前面加be 小题6:eye改为eyes    小题7:watch改为watching  小题8:works改为work   小题9:Had改为has  小题10:去掉at。

试题分析：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。 小题1:about改为with 固定搭配quarrel with sb与某人吵架； 小题2:holds后面加the 本句名词view后面哟同位语修饰，说明该词表示特指，所以使用定冠词the表示特指。 小题3:fully改为full 名词use前面需要使用形容词full修饰，而不是副词fully，因为副词通常在句中做状语。 小题4:me改为her 考察上下文。本句是指对母亲来说如果我看了电视，似乎就不能控制自己。 小题5:unable前面加be 情态动词will后面要接动词原形，固定多陪陪be unable to do sth不能做某事。 小题6:eye改为eyes 考察常识，看电视对人的双眼都有害，故使用复数形式eyes。 小题7:watch改为watching 本句考察的是动名词短语在句中做主语的用法，动词原形watch在句中不能做主语。 小题8:works改为work 本句中的work指工作，是一个不可数名词，没有复数形式。 小题9: Had改为has 本句中没有出现过去时的时间状元与，所以不可能指过去的过去所发生的动作。 小题10:去掉at。副词abroad要单独使用，前面不需要介词。

Answer 2

I often quarrel (about) my mother over whether I can watch TV afterschool. She holds∧ view
1. with 2. the
that senior three students have to make (fully) use of every minute to work hard at their lessons.
3. full
It seems to (me) that once I am allowed to do that, I'll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about
4. her 5. be
my study. She also thinks it is bad for my (eye). But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion,
6. eyes
(watch) TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard (works).Besides, it is important for us to know
7. watching 8. work
what (had) happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.
9. has 10. 去掉