Question

请英文高手帮忙看下面的英文察看下有没有语法错误,几句,很快采纳!!!

When your school have the final decision? what time should I receive the application results?
I wish I could go to your college to get well education, I have great ambition to conquer difficulties in this fulfill challenging road, with your school's great help to get a high level in the future. I can imaging how beautiful that picture!

Answer 1

语法错误并不多,但是恕我直言,作为学校申请信来说,写得很不符合英语习惯

Could you please advise when the final decision would be made and when I would be able to get the result?

I wish that I could have my graduate study (或postgraduate stydy) in your university as I am a person who has great ambition and likes to take any challenge. I am confident that I would achieve a higher level in academic field if I would have the oppotunity to get the degree from your university.

Answer 2

最后加 will be 或is