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短文改错!Icomeacrosstheolddustmannearlyeverymorningigotoschool.EverytimeImeethim,hegreets...
短文改错!I come across the old dustman nearly every morning i go to school. Every time I meet him, he greets me with smile. Maybe it is six o’clock in the morning or even early when the old man begins to working. He looks at least in the sixties and is always dressing in dark blue. In my opinion, the old man is very worth respecting. Although he is old, he doesn’t depend on other for a living; in the same time,he provides us with clean surroundings. His optimistic attitudes to life is inspiring me to work hardly to achieve my own dream.
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I come across the(改成an) old dust man nearly every morning i go to school. Every time I meet him, he greets me with (此处加a) smile. Maybe it is six o’clock in the morning or even early(改成earlier) when the old man begins to working(改成work). He looks at least in the(改成his) sixties and is always dressing(改成dressed) in dark blue. In my opinion, the old man is very worth respecting. Although he is old, he doesn’t depend on other(改成others) for a living; in(改成at) the same time,he provides us with clean surroundings. His optimistic attitudes to life is(改成are) inspiring me to work hardly(改成hard) to achieve my own dream.
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