Question

高分请教英语高手帮我翻译一下

我的名字是XXX，英文名字是XX，是XXX学校的学生，专业是酒店管理。我非常喜欢这个专业，它在第三产业中占有重要地位。
我来自安徽合肥，自认为普通话还可以，英语水平相比较来说可能差点，但是我学习能力特别好，相信在一个好的环境下，我的英语会有很大的进步的。我很相信这一点。
我认为酒店这一行业有很大的发展空间，特别是迅速发展的中国，虽然现在金融危机还在持续，但这对中国来说即是挑战又是机遇。现在也证实了这一点。我在学习期间做过很多酒店兼职，从中学到很多东西。我知道本酒店是XX集团下的品牌，是国际连锁集团。公司以XX为中心（文化、价值观）
XX酒店我觉的非常适合我，而且我也很想去这个地方发展

Answer 1

My name is XXX, and English name is XX, I am one student of XXX School, the major is hotel management . I enjoy the profession, which in the tertiary industry occupies an important position.
I come from Anhui, Hefei, since Mandarin can also think, compared to the standard of English is almost possible, but in particular my ability to study well, I believe in a good environment, my English will be a lot of progress. I am convinced of it.
Hotels in this industry in my opinion there is much room for development, in particular the rapid development of the Chinese, although it is now the financial crisis continues, but for China that is a challenge and an opportunity. Now also confirmed this point. During the study done at my hotel a lot of part-time, learned a lot of things. I know the hotel is under XX Group brand, is an international chain. XX-centric company (culture, values)
XX hotel I feel very fit me, but I also want to go the local development

Answer 2

My name is XXX, English name is XXX is XX, students of the school, is the management of hotels. I really like this, it is in the third industry occupies an important position.
I come from hefei, anhui think mandarin, English level can compare might almost, but I very good learning ability, believe in a good environment, my English will have great progress. I believe it.
I think this is a great hotel industry's development space, especially the rapid development of China's financial crisis, although now, but it continues to China is challenge and opportunity. Now also confirmed this point. I do a lot during the study in the hotel part-time, learn lots of things. I know this hotel is the brand of XX group, is an international group. Companies with XX for center (culture), values,
XX hotel I felt very suitable for me, but I also want to go to the local development

Answer 3

My name is XXX, the English name is XX, the students are XXX School, are in hotel management major. I very much enjoy the profession, which in the tertiary industry occupies an important position.
I come from Anhui, Hefei, since Mandarin can also think, compared to the standard of English is almost possible, but in particular my ability to study well, I believe in a good environment, my English will be a lot of progress. I am convinced of it.
Hotels in this industry in my opinion there is much room for development, in particular the rapid development of the Chinese, although it is now the financial crisis continues, but for China that is a challenge and an opportunity. Now also confirmed this point. During the study done at my hotel a lot of part-time, learned a lot of things. I know the hotel is under XX Group brand, is an international chain. XX-centric company (culture, values)
XX hotel I feel very fit me, but I also want to go the local development

Answer 4

My name is XXX, English name is XX, is XXX school student, specialized is the hotel management. I like this specialty, it holds the important position in the tertiary industry. I from Anhui Hefei, from thought that the standard spoken Chinese is alright, English proficiency compared possibly almost, but my learning capability was specially good, believed that under a good environment, my English will have in a big way progressive. I believe this point very much. I thought that hotel this profession has the very big development opportunities, specially rapidly expand China, although the present financial crisis is also continuing, but this to China is the challenge is also an opportunity. Now also confirmed this point. I in study has made many hotel concurrent jobs, from middle school to many thing. I knew that this hotel is under XX group's brand, is the international group. The company take XX as the center (culture, values) the XX hotel I thinks is suitable I, moreover I also very want to go to this place development