2021年7月10日雅思写作真题与范文
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雅思写作考试对于一部分同学来说是一大难点，大家在平时练习雅思写作的时候可以练习一下真题，下面是为大家带来的2021年7月10日雅思写作真题与范文。
一、2021年7月10日雅思写作真题与范文
小作文
类型：柱状图主题：英国在2001-2008吃蔬菜和水果的人数百分比。
大作文
Education of young people is a highly prioritized in many countries. However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
范文
Many countries prioritize mainly the education of children. However，some people opine to have societies start funding iliterate adults to learn. I agree with the view and， this essay will explain the reasons for adult schooling.
Firstly， when a person struggles with reading or writing， social impacts are profound. Over a while， they develop low self-esteem， feel emotions such as shame and fear： For example， being iliterate， the individual would avoid situations where they have to communicate and make decisions.Secondly， unlearned adults are more susceptible to live destitutely. In developing countries， people living in poverty are either unemployed or work in low-skilled jobs. As a result of unemployment and to make ends meet， children are sent to work， while others get involved in theft and other crimes. With the funds， they can study in vocational training schools to develop skills to earn a decent living； and literacy training which raises reading proficiency.
Lastly， uneducated individuals are prone to health issues. Due to the fact， they have trouble reading and understanding safety protocols， tend to have more workplace accidents and prolonged recovery period. Crucial information like the inability to read prescription labels and drug overdose is more common among these people. We can ask them to repeat instructions and assess their baseline information about their health before proceeding further.
In conclusion， I reiterate that it is immensely vital for adults to be literate in today＇s society and， we must take urgent measures and invest more to educate these adults.
二、雅思写作技巧
1、为了高级而高级的做法，只会弄巧成拙，简单朴素的表达就够了。
2、字小的、字间隔窄的同学，请把练字提上日程，不是练好不好看，而是练大小和间距，不要在这上面吃亏。
3、文章的逻辑只正确是不够的，还要够明显，明显，明显！也就是说，文章一定要让考官一目了然地、准确地把握到你的逻辑框架。要明显很简单，主要就是从连接词上面搞。
4、一些辅导材料基本喜欢把写作分为各种类别，真滴没有必要，作文就是一个分析问题+表达观点+解决问题的过程，如果是问是否agree， 那就去掉解决问题这一步，如果问how to solve the problem，那就是这三个都放。
三、雅思写作高分句型
1.So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 从句（如此……以致于……） 例如：
So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
2.形容词+ as +主语+ be，主语+ 谓语（虽然……） 例如：
Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
3.The + 比较级+主语+谓语，the +比较级+主语+谓语（愈……愈……） 例如：
The harder you work， the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
4.It is time + 主语+ 过去式（该是……的时候了） 例如：
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
注意：此句型可以转化为简单句句型：It is time for sth./for sb to do…. 例如：
It is time for lunch.
该吃午饭了。
5.To be frank/ To tell the truth， …. （老实说， ……） 例如：
To be frank/ To tell the truth， whether you like it or not， you have no other choice.
老实说，不论你喜不喜欢，你别无选择。
6.it took him a year to do….（ 他用了1年的时间来做……） 例如：
Asfar as we know， it took him more than a year to write the book.
目前为止我们所知道的是，他用了1年的时间来写这本书。
It took them a long time to realize they had made a mistake.
过了很久，他们才意识到犯错了。
四、雅思大作文写作的注意事项
考官对模板深恶痛绝的程度可能超过很多考生的想象，而且，如果考生在第一段还使用大量恶俗的模板，还在第一句说with the development of society，那他会发现他的成绩单上的作文得分会在4分左右。其实，翻翻雅思考官的范文，我们会发现，考官在第一段只干了两件事情：引出背景+表明观点，甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情（引出背景），仅此而已。但是，考官的首段会很具体，会和文章特定场合挂钩
作文还要加标题
英语考试有一个国际惯例（common practice）：写作文时不需要加标题，直接写正文就行。加标题属于浪费感情，浪费表情。而且，这个标题可能太大，一篇250字的文章不能承担标题之重；这个标题可能太小，只照顾到你这篇文章的一小部分；这个标题可能加错了，意思与文章相反，反而会误导考官。总之，不需要加任何标题。
留给大作文的时间太短
考官明确提出，Task 2 carries more weights（大作文占的分量要比小作文大），而且考官在改作文的时候确实以大作文为主。但是考生在考试的时候，小作文控制不住时间，写得过于详细，最后留给大作文的时间只有半个小时不到，这样做就死定了。所以，我们建议小作文的时间控制在20分钟以内，超过20分钟没写完也不要再写了，而写大作文的时间一定要大于等于40分钟。
一、2021年7月10日雅思写作真题与范文
小作文
类型：柱状图主题：英国在2001-2008吃蔬菜和水果的人数百分比。
大作文
Education of young people is a highly prioritized in many countries. However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
范文
Many countries prioritize mainly the education of children. However，some people opine to have societies start funding iliterate adults to learn. I agree with the view and， this essay will explain the reasons for adult schooling.
Firstly， when a person struggles with reading or writing， social impacts are profound. Over a while， they develop low self-esteem， feel emotions such as shame and fear： For example， being iliterate， the individual would avoid situations where they have to communicate and make decisions.Secondly， unlearned adults are more susceptible to live destitutely. In developing countries， people living in poverty are either unemployed or work in low-skilled jobs. As a result of unemployment and to make ends meet， children are sent to work， while others get involved in theft and other crimes. With the funds， they can study in vocational training schools to develop skills to earn a decent living； and literacy training which raises reading proficiency.
Lastly， uneducated individuals are prone to health issues. Due to the fact， they have trouble reading and understanding safety protocols， tend to have more workplace accidents and prolonged recovery period. Crucial information like the inability to read prescription labels and drug overdose is more common among these people. We can ask them to repeat instructions and assess their baseline information about their health before proceeding further.
In conclusion， I reiterate that it is immensely vital for adults to be literate in today＇s society and， we must take urgent measures and invest more to educate these adults.
二、雅思写作技巧
1、为了高级而高级的做法，只会弄巧成拙，简单朴素的表达就够了。
2、字小的、字间隔窄的同学，请把练字提上日程，不是练好不好看，而是练大小和间距，不要在这上面吃亏。
3、文章的逻辑只正确是不够的，还要够明显，明显，明显！也就是说，文章一定要让考官一目了然地、准确地把握到你的逻辑框架。要明显很简单，主要就是从连接词上面搞。
4、一些辅导材料基本喜欢把写作分为各种类别，真滴没有必要，作文就是一个分析问题+表达观点+解决问题的过程，如果是问是否agree， 那就去掉解决问题这一步，如果问how to solve the problem，那就是这三个都放。
三、雅思写作高分句型
1.So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 从句（如此……以致于……） 例如：
So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
2.形容词+ as +主语+ be，主语+ 谓语（虽然……） 例如：
Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
3.The + 比较级+主语+谓语，the +比较级+主语+谓语（愈……愈……） 例如：
The harder you work， the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
4.It is time + 主语+ 过去式（该是……的时候了） 例如：
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
注意：此句型可以转化为简单句句型：It is time for sth./for sb to do…. 例如：
It is time for lunch.
该吃午饭了。
5.To be frank/ To tell the truth， …. （老实说， ……） 例如：
To be frank/ To tell the truth， whether you like it or not， you have no other choice.
老实说，不论你喜不喜欢，你别无选择。
6.it took him a year to do….（ 他用了1年的时间来做……） 例如：
Asfar as we know， it took him more than a year to write the book.
目前为止我们所知道的是，他用了1年的时间来写这本书。
It took them a long time to realize they had made a mistake.
过了很久，他们才意识到犯错了。
四、雅思大作文写作的注意事项
考官对模板深恶痛绝的程度可能超过很多考生的想象，而且，如果考生在第一段还使用大量恶俗的模板，还在第一句说with the development of society，那他会发现他的成绩单上的作文得分会在4分左右。其实，翻翻雅思考官的范文，我们会发现，考官在第一段只干了两件事情：引出背景+表明观点，甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情（引出背景），仅此而已。但是，考官的首段会很具体，会和文章特定场合挂钩
作文还要加标题
英语考试有一个国际惯例（common practice）：写作文时不需要加标题，直接写正文就行。加标题属于浪费感情，浪费表情。而且，这个标题可能太大，一篇250字的文章不能承担标题之重；这个标题可能太小，只照顾到你这篇文章的一小部分；这个标题可能加错了，意思与文章相反，反而会误导考官。总之，不需要加任何标题。
留给大作文的时间太短
考官明确提出，Task 2 carries more weights（大作文占的分量要比小作文大），而且考官在改作文的时候确实以大作文为主。但是考生在考试的时候，小作文控制不住时间，写得过于详细，最后留给大作文的时间只有半个小时不到，这样做就死定了。所以，我们建议小作文的时间控制在20分钟以内，超过20分钟没写完也不要再写了，而写大作文的时间一定要大于等于40分钟。
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