Question

请帮忙修改一下这段英文作文，在线等。。

My experience with a foreign language began in primary school,when I took my first English class. My English teacher is a gentle and patient teacher. Whether we answer questions in class or in the operation error，Teachers will be very careful as we pointed out the wrong one by one. Whenever there are do not understand, we ask questions to the teacher, the teacher will answer them one by one for us. As the teachers will not be because we are criticizing us for an error, let us like to learn English.

中文原意：
我学外语的经历始于小学的第一堂英语课。无论我们在课堂回答问题还是在作业中出现错误，老师都会很细心的逐一为我们指出错误。每当遇到有不明白的地方，我们向老师提出问题时，老师都会一一为我们解答。由于老师从不会因为我们出现错误而批评我们，让我们都很喜欢学习英语。

Answer 1

My experience with a foreign language began in primary school when I took my first English class. My English teacher was very gentle and patient. Whether we answer questions in class or in the operation wrongly，the teacher would be very careful to point out the mistakes we made one by one. Whenever we did not understand the grammar and asked questions to the teacher, the teacher would answer them patiently. Because the teacher would never criticize us for our mistakes, we all enjoyed learning English very much.

其实楼上的答案也有些小毛病,主从句和标点都弄得不太利索
这篇应该差不多了吧

Answer 2

I started the experience of learning a foreign language from the first Englis class in primary school.
The teacher points out our mistakes one by one that we make in the housework or oral response.
The teacher will explain the unstudied question carefully while we ask him.
Teacher never criticize us for our mistakes,so all of us like learning English..
这是我翻译的。希望可以帮到你。。。

Answer 3

My experience with a foreign language began in primary school,when I took my first English class. My English teacher is a gentle and patient teacher. Whether we answer questions in class or in the operation error，Teacher will be very careful as we pointed out the wrong one by one. Whenever there are do not understand, we ask questions to the teacher, the teacher will answer them one by one for us. As the teacher will not be because we are criticizing us for an error, let us like to learn English.

Answer 4

My first experience in learning foreign language began at the first english class when I was a primary student, the teacher was very gentle and kind, whatever mistakes we made in class or homework, She always pointed out the mistakes to us carefully.

When we had difficulties in study, we asked her for help, She always answered our questions one by one patiently. Our teacher never blamed us for our mistakes, so we liked learning English very much.

供参考吧

Answer 5

错的还蛮多的，好歹，前面说的老师，后面不该用复数的。