Question

短文改错，急求！！！！！！！！

I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail.I am glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese.I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me.How times flies!Our friebdship has lasted for several months.We have got to know but learned a lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from me.Thanks again for writing me.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Best wishes to you and your family.

Answer 1

你好

修改如下：

I am very excited to have received an e-mail.I am glad you have made such (a去掉，progress不可数）great progress that you can write your e-mail well in Chinese.

I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent (it去掉) to me.

How time flies!Our friendship has lasted for several months.We have got to know and learned a lot from each other.Yes,it is clear that your life in your country is quite different from mine.

Thanks again for writing to me.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes to you and your family.

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祝你学习进步，更上一层楼！

不明白请及时追问，满意敬请采纳，O(∩_∩)O谢谢~~

追问

总共有10个错误，，，

追答

friendship应该是你自己打错，不算题目本身错。
这就10个了

追问

每句最多两点错误，第二句是不是多了？

每句最多两点错误，第二句是不是多了？

追答

这样啊
还有另一个改法
在good前面加in

in good Chinese
这样就只算一处错误了。

Answer 2

1 a great progress - great progress 2 good chinese -in good chinese 3 show-showed 4 times-time
5 but-we 6 clearly-clear 7 me -mine 8 writing me -writing to me 9 hear -hearing

追问

你改的有错的，but改成and，另外，还少一个，才九个都不够

你改的有错的，but改成and，另外，还少一个，才九个都不够

追答

太着急了

追问

再改啊

追答

以后吧