请英语高手帮我改一下这篇英语作文！
帮我修改一下语法错误，和不正确的地方！Howareyou?Whataboutthelife?I'minaseniormiddleschool,thelifeofmineh...
帮我修改一下语法错误，和不正确的地方！
How are you?What about the life?I'm in a senior middle school,the life of mine has a great change.
Experienced a test,I entered another stage of life--Senior Middle School.There are no less easy for me to imagine,instead it's so busy.Every day is buy for the future.
In the new ervironment,classmates and teachers are so good.Teachers are quite cute,and they are very patient teaching for me and they can help me to solve the problems that I can't solve them.My new friends are very nice to me,they make me so happy, and let me know the important of the friendship.
I'm fine.And I'm looking forward to from you. 展开
How are you?What about the life?I'm in a senior middle school,the life of mine has a great change.
Experienced a test,I entered another stage of life--Senior Middle School.There are no less easy for me to imagine,instead it's so busy.Every day is buy for the future.
In the new ervironment,classmates and teachers are so good.Teachers are quite cute,and they are very patient teaching for me and they can help me to solve the problems that I can't solve them.My new friends are very nice to me,they make me so happy, and let me know the important of the friendship.
I'm fine.And I'm looking forward to from you. 展开
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错误很多很多很多很多。。。我直接帮你改文章吧、对比一下哈。你那估计是用机器旳吧，都这水平。
How are you ? Do you live well（过得好吗）？I'm in a Senior Middle School.My life had（应该是过去的事情吧） a great change.
After the exam I've entered another stage of my life that I entered another Senior Middle School.There are no less easy for me to imagine(这句没看懂，至今不知道less easy什么意思).Everyday it's so busy 'cos that eveybody is buying for the futures .Classmates and teachers are very friendly in the new school.Teachers are quite lovely.(修饰人 cute修饰物品）They can teach us patiently.(注意是副词）And they can help us to solve some problems that make us understand them.My friends are very in harmony with me.（和我很和谐）They could make me be so happy.
And I let me treasure the important friendship.
I hope you can be trying harder!
Write me soon!
Love
×××
需要努力啊 年轻人。。。
How are you ? Do you live well（过得好吗）？I'm in a Senior Middle School.My life had（应该是过去的事情吧） a great change.
After the exam I've entered another stage of my life that I entered another Senior Middle School.There are no less easy for me to imagine(这句没看懂，至今不知道less easy什么意思).Everyday it's so busy 'cos that eveybody is buying for the futures .Classmates and teachers are very friendly in the new school.Teachers are quite lovely.(修饰人 cute修饰物品）They can teach us patiently.(注意是副词）And they can help us to solve some problems that make us understand them.My friends are very in harmony with me.（和我很和谐）They could make me be so happy.
And I let me treasure the important friendship.
I hope you can be trying harder!
Write me soon!
Love
×××
需要努力啊 年轻人。。。
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How are you? What about your life? I am at the senior middle school. The life of mine has changed a lot. I have entered another stage of my life which i am experiencing - a senior middle school student. It is not easy for me because i am so busy every day. What i am doing is for my future. My classmates and teachers are kind. The teachers are quite cute and patient. They teach me a lot and help me solving the problems that i can't solve. My new friends are very nice to me. They make me so happy. I have found the importance of frienship.
I am fine and looking foward to hearing from you.
I am fine and looking foward to hearing from you.
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