请帮我检查一下这段英文有没有错 谢谢
Hello,everyone.Iamajunior.Mypersonalityisrelativelyslowandhot,Iwillbeveryrestrainedwi...
Hello, everyone. I am a junior. My personality is relatively slow and hot, I will be very restrained with unfamiliar people, and I can talk with familiar people. I have good logical thinking ability and strong acceptance ability. My major is fashion design. I love my major. My ideal is to be an excellent fashion designer. Specifically, I hope I can design more suitable and beautiful clothes for fat people in the future. In order to realize my ideal, I have made a short-term plan for three years and a long-term plan for six years. I intend to work hard to improve my professional accomplishment in school. After graduation, I will work for two years. When I have some practical experience, I will start preparing for the postgraduate entrance examination and spend three years after the entrance examination. By then, I will be able to better improve myself. That's all about my self-introduction.
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开始几句太直接用中文字翻译成英文,老外不是这样说话。
Hello, everyone! My name is XXXXXXX. I am 18(年龄). I am a conservative person because of my personality. I may look like a bit cool to strangers. But after I get familiar with them, I will be enthusiastic and talkative. I have a strong logical mind and I can learn quickly.
Hello, everyone! My name is XXXXXXX. I am 18(年龄). I am a conservative person because of my personality. I may look like a bit cool to strangers. But after I get familiar with them, I will be enthusiastic and talkative. I have a strong logical mind and I can learn quickly.
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写的挺好的。
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请柬谢谢你们关心我们的秘密我们已经到了关了灯全集下载患者吗了吗你丁老师您好在吗在吗在吗在吗点发货了没有啊啊啊啊我喜欢的人了吗立口感很好看啊五环旗唔知啊啊啊啊不要脸的东西了没有啊昂昂昂科威特价值连城功能性饮料机器人总动员加油吧实习生啊啊啊不要加油吧实习生吗今天晚上睡不着了吗宝贝二边二它这是我们的工作人员信息化时代城市套路深主要看你现在在哪里啊啊啊不要这个星期六吗丁啉二之国际庄周六周天吧唧吧唧的是什么意思啊照发发给我的精神病患者
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请补全问题,我是英语本科生,四级分数547,虽然分数一般,但是足以解决基本常见英语问题
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