Question

高中英语改错题

其中有一行是对的,其他行各有一处错误

***请告诉我为什么是那样改***

1.The day before the speech contest an English teacher
2.talked to me.She said that she and my classmate all wished
3.me success,but it didn't matter that I would win or not.
4.When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous
5.as I shook like a leaf.There were so many people present!
6.Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.
7.She was smiling but nodding at me.I remembered her
8.words and calm down.I did a good job and won the first
9.prize.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the glory hall.
10.Whenever I see them,I often think my English teacher.

Answer 1

一般改错要看主谓语一致性或是时态的问题或是固定搭配问题
1.an改为the 因为他不是泛指 从文中可以推断出是是特指这位英语老师，所以用the

2.classmate改成classmates，因为是老师和所有的同学，所以用复数

3that改为whether.固定搭配whether or not，意思是是否

4.对的

5.as改为that 因为搭配为so。。。。。。that
文中是太紧张以致于抖得像叶子

6.a去掉。固定短语搭配catch sight of 瞥到

7.but改为and，文中没有转折的意思，老师点头微笑，应该是并列的，所以用and

8.calm改为calmed 文中应该都是过去时 前面也用remembered

9.is改为are 因为前面是两个主语

10.think of 想起某人用think of

Answer 2

1. an→the
从句意可以看出，此处特指作者的英语老师

2. classmate→classmates
作者只有一个同学吗？

3. that→whether
后面有or not，所以引导词为whether(是否)

4. √
没错

5. as→that
固定句型：so...that...

6. 去掉a
固定短语：catch sight of

7. but→and
句意为并列，并非转折

8. calm→calmed
整篇几乎都是过去时，句中的remembered也是

9. is→are
主语是my picture and the prize，是复数名词

10. think和my中间加入of
think of... 想起...

Answer 3

1 before the speech contest day,or（a day before the speech contest day)the English teacher talked to me, she said she and my classmate all wish me have a success, but it did not matter that I will win or not. when I was on the stage the next day, I've felt so nervous I shook as a leaf , there were so many people present, then (suddently), I caught a sight to my English teacher in crowd, she was smiling, and nodding at me, I remmemered her words that clam down, I did good job and won the first prize. Now my pictrue and the prize are hangging on the glory hall, whenever I see those stuff, I will think of my English teacher.

These make you sense？