Question

求英语汉译英，谢谢大伙了！！！！万分感谢

1 不打算努力工作的人就没有可能取得成功
2 看来你从因特网上下载的这个故事是原文的简写本
3 我相信如果财富以更为合理的方式分配，世界上就没有人会挨冻受饿
4 玛丽加到她网站上的图片确实吸引一些访客的注意
5 拉萨没有让她身体的残疾挡住她想当棒球评论作家的路

Answer 1

1)Success are not prepared for those who never work hard.（这句这样表达更地道，更流畅）

2)It seems that the story you download from the Internet is an abridged edition.（定语从句，省略了that）

3)In my perspective of view,no one in the world would suffer from cold and stavation if the money was delivered more resonably.（此处注意一定要用would 和 was，因为是虚拟语气，与事实相反的，现在的财富并没有更好的分配）

4)The pictures that Mary added to her website did caught the attention of the visitors'.

5)The body disability didn't stop Lasa from becoming a criticism author of baseball.（stop Sb. from doing Sth.就是阻拦，挡路的意思，如果非要翻译成什么block the way of，是非常白痴的，非常chenglish
的）

我英语很好的，相信我吧 ^_^祝你英语成绩更上一层楼！

Answer 2

1\people who don't pan to work hard can't make success.
2\it seems that the story you downloaded from the internet is an abbreviation version of the original.
3\i belive there would be no starvation in the world if all fortune was allocated in more reasonal manner.
4\the pictures mary added to her website did attractive some visitor's concern.
5\the body disability of Lasa failed to pull her back from the way to becoming a bat journal.

Answer 3

1 可以用 no pain no gain 嘛 比较老套啦~呵呵~属于cliche的
no one would succeed unless he worked hard

2 the story u have downloaded from the internet is the simplified edition of the original one

3 i believe that on one would get starving and frosting, if the wealth was alloted in a more suitable way

4 the pictures which Marry have added in her website,are truely capturing the viewers' attention

5 although Lasa has physical disabilities, she has become a baseball critic eventually

不晓得是不是应该这样 呵呵

Answer 4

1 do not intend to work hard on is not likely to succeed
2 It seems that you download from the Internet This story is a simplified version of the original
3 I believe that if the wealth to a more reasonable manner, no one will be the world's hungry by cold
4 Marie to her picture on the site did attract the attention of visitors
5 Lhasa did not let her physical disability, she wanted to be blocking the way baseball writer comments

Answer 5

1 don't intend to work hard is impossible to succeed
2 it seems you downloaded from the Internet this story is an abridged edition
3 I believe if wealth with more reasonable distribution of the way in the world, no one will AiDong hunger
4 Mary to her web site visitors to attract some pictures really
5 let her have the Lhasa block defect to her body when the baseball writers. Comments

Answer 6

1. the people who has no plans to work hard then there will no success that they will gaining from it.
2. reckon the story you download from the internet is an abridged edition.
3.I believe if the we share the wealth in a more resonable way, then there will be no more people who suffer from the hunger anymore in the world.
4.The picture that Murray uploaded in her internet website did get some attractions from the vistors.
5. Larsa did not let her disability to stop her journey of wants to be a baseball writer.