Question

请帮我修改以下简单的英文.

Answer 1

更新1:

点解有些朋友会用过去式? 每星期都做
不是现在式吗?

Dancing and playing piano are my favourite hobbies. Every weekend I go to a dancing school to practice dancing.(学跳舞) I have a lot of good friends In the dancing class. I go to a music school and practice playing piano every sunday. (学弹琴) My piano teacher is a very nice girl
I like her very much.
其实你的句子并没错
但如要更英语化
应稍为改些少: My favorite hobbies are dancing and playing piano. I went to dancing school to practice (不需重复dancing) every weekend. I have a lot of friends in the dancing school. I went to a piano school for lessons every Sunday. My piano teacher is a very nice girl and I like her very much.
参考: Self
Dancing and playing piano are my favourite hobbies. Every weekend I go to dance school to practice dancing.(学跳舞) (舞蹈班)I have a lot of good friends in the dancing class. Every Sunday I go to (琴行) learn how to play piano. (学弹琴) My piano teacher is a very nice girl
I like her very much.
参考: my suggestion