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随着人们消费观念的改变，网上购物环境的日趋成熟。网上购物这一电子商务模式已越来越来被人们所接受，在年轻人中更为普及。成立不足6年的“淘宝”更一举抢占了国内C2C市场85%的份额，其网站亦成为国内最热门的网站之一，“淘宝”改变了人们的购物方式，改变了人们的消费观念。
本文开始介绍了“淘宝”的发展历史和“淘宝”的特点，然后对“淘宝” 的竞争策略进行了分析，也正是依靠这些策略，“淘宝”打败了昔日的巨头“eBay易趣”，取得了市场份额。在介绍和分析电子商务盈利模式后，我们对“淘宝”自身独特的盈利模式进行了剖析，看到了“淘宝”强大的盈利能力和潜能。而随着国内C2C市场的日趋成熟，“淘宝”的对手和潜在对手也越来越多，我们对“淘宝”的发展给出了自己的看法。并重点对B2C这一很有潜能的市场进行了展开，分析了“淘宝”和其对手的各自特点，也看出了“淘宝”在这一新兴领域的优势和劣势，并展望了“淘宝”的B2C前景。最后我们就“淘宝”发展路上可能遇到的重大挑战，谈了一下自己的看法。
“网上购物环境的日趋成熟”这句能帮忙翻译成状语吗？
“网上购物环境的日趋成熟”后面的句号改成逗号，和前面那句“随着人们消费观念的改变”同为状语

Answer 1

With the change of people's shopping idea, the environment of on-line shopping has grown more matured. On-line shopping, as one mode of E-commerce, is accepted by more customers, espcially by the young. After less than 6 years since its establishment, Taobao, now occupies 85% plus of China'a domestic C2C market. It is one of the most popular wabsites in China as well. Taobao has transformed people's traditional ways of shopping and has altered their idea of purchasing goods.
We have introduced Taobao's development and features, then we have analyzed its competition strategy by which Taobao has defeated the once-giant, “eBay易趣”,and won its market share. After the introduction and the analysis of the profit-making mode of E-commerce, we have looked into the unique profit-making mode of Taobao, getting a view of its capacity of bringing in profits and its potential. However, with the maturization of our domestic C2C market, Taobao is inevitably going to confront with more competitors. Therefore, we have worked out our view of Taobao's future development , laying special attention on Taobao's and its competitors' features in the promising B2C market. We got to kown Taobao's prospect as well as its strengths and weaknesses in this emerging market. In closing, we expressed our opinion of some possible challenges which Taobao may meet on its path of development.
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Answer 2

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这是请老师翻译的

1As consumer attitudes change, and online shopping environment matures. This online shopping to e-commerce model has been increasingly accepted among young people a wider public. Established for less than 6 years "Taobao" more in one fell swoop to seize the domestic C2C market share of 85 percent, its website has become the most popular Web sites, "Taobao" changed the way people's to change people's consumption concept.
The beginning of this article introduced the "Taobao" history and "Taobao" characteristics, and then the "Taobao" competitive strategy analysis, it is relying on these strategies, "Taobao" giant beat the old "eBay eBay" achieved market share. Description and analysis of e-commerce in the profit model, we have the "Taobao" its own unique pattern of profit analysis, see the "Taobao" strong profitability and potential. C2C as the domestic market matures, "Taobao" opponents and potential opponents are more and more, we "Taobao" given the development of his views. And focus on the great potential of the B2C market had started to analyze the "Taobao" and their opponents their own characteristics, but also to see the "Taobao" in this emerging field of strengths and weaknesses, and look forward to the "Taobao" the prospects of B2C. Finally, we on the "Taobao" development along the major challenges likely to be encountered, talked about what his own views.

Answer 3

Changing , web shopping environment be getting with every passing day are mature with the fact that people consumes concept's. Web shopping , is more universal in young person already Yue Lai Yue to come to is accepted by people this one Electronic Commerce pattern. Set up "naughty insufficient treasure " for 6 years having raced to control the in the homeland C2C marketplace at one stroke 85%'s portion, whose website also becomes one of the most popular website of in the homeland ", clean precious " the shopping way having changed people , the consumption concept having changed people.

The history having introduced development of "naughty treasure " and the characteristic "cleaning treasure " the main body of a book is started, tactics has carried out analysis on "to cleaning precious " competition and then , has also exactly has been to depend on these tactics ", has cleaned treasure " having been defeated in former days magnate "eBay is easy to interesting " , to have got market share. Behind the pattern introducing and analysing Electronic Commerce to gain a profit of, we oneself is unique to "cleaning treasure " gain a profit of the pattern has been in progress have analysed , have seen "the naughty precious " profitability and latent energy big and powerful. C2C marketplace gradually be mature but with in the homeland ", the opponent and lurking opponent cleaning treasure " have been also more and more many , we have given out self view to "cleaning development of treasure ". And priority this marketplace having latent energy once very much to B2C having carried out development , have analysed each's characteristic "cleaning treasure " and whose opponent , have also have perceived the B2C prospect "having cleaned precious " advantage and inferior position in this one Xin Xing field, and having looked into the distance "to clean treasure ". We "have cleaned treasure " finally right away developing the significant challenge that on the way possibility comes across , have talked about self view.

网上购物环境的日趋成熟
Web shopping environment gradually be mature.

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Answer 4

As consumer attitudes change, the Internet has matured to the environment. This online shopping to e-commerce model has been increasingly accepted among young people a wider public. Established for less than 6 years "Taobao" more in one fell swoop to seize the domestic C2C market share of 85 percent, its website has become the most popular Web sites, "Taobao" changed the way people's to change people's consumption concept.
The beginning of this article introduced the "Taobao" history and "Taobao" characteristics, and then the "Taobao" competitive strategy analysis, it is relying on these strategies, "Taobao" giant beat the old "eBay eBay" achieved market share. Description and analysis of e-commerce in the profit model, we have the "Taobao" its own unique pattern of profit analysis, see the "Taobao" strong profitability and potential. C2C as the domestic market matures, "Taobao" opponents and potential opponents are more and more, we "Taobao" given the development of his views. And focus on the great potential of the B2C market had started to analyze the "Taobao" and their opponents their own characteristics, but also to see the "Taobao" in this emerging field of strengths and weaknesses, and look forward to the "Taobao" the prospects of B2C. Finally, we on the "Taobao" development along the major challenges likely to be encountered, talked about what his own views.
Add: "online shopping environment matures," this can be translated into adverbial help you?
"Internet shopping environment matures," into a full stop behind the comma, and in front of the sentence, "As consumer attitudes change," the same shape