Question

改错，请根据中文，把前面的英文改错，谢谢大家

I just want to tell you,我只想告诉你
You always thought i look like a child.你总是认为我象个孩子
You said .i ‘m cold, and don’t care anything.你说我冷漠，什么都不关心
i want to be the pure one because my heart had been broken.我只想做一个单纯的人因为我的心曾经受过伤
I want to forget the unhappy things.我想忘记不开心的事
I don’t like complex thing.不喜欢复杂的事情
Baby is the purest one.such as a fool.婴儿是最单纯的，同傻子一样
You can’t know me!你不能理解我
You have your style for life and I also have.你有你的生活方式，我也有我的
Till now,I think we are the person who is not in a world.直到现在，我认为我们不是一个世界的人
Just like you are a king and I’m a cinderlla.就象你是个国王，而我只是女佣
I don’t now what will happen beteen us.我不知道我们之间以后会怎样
How far apart we are?我们之间的距离有多远？

How far apart we are?

Answer 1

I want to tell you only,我只想告诉你
You always think I look like a child.你总是认为我象个孩子
You said .I 'm cold, and don’t care about anything.你说我冷漠，什么都不关心
i want to be pure because my heart had been broken.我只想做一个单纯的人因为我的心曾经受过伤
I want to forget the unhappy story我想忘记不开心的事
I don’t like complicated thing.不喜欢复杂的事情
Baby is the purest one.same as a fool.婴儿是最单纯的，同傻子一样
You can’t understand me!你不能理解我
You have your life style and I also have mine.你有你的生活方式，我也有我的
Till now,I think we are the persons who are not in the same world.直到现在，我认为我们不是一个世界的人
Just like you are a king and I’m a servant.就象你是个国王，而我只是女佣
I don’t know what will happen between us.我不知道我们之间以后会怎样
what is the distance between us?我们之间的距离有多远？

Answer 2

是不是你给朋友写信想表达这些中文意思？如果是，我给你按你的意思，英语的思维来改一下。
I just wanted to let you know that you were wrong to think that I looked like a baby. You said that I was cold and did not care about anything. That is not true. It is just that I want to keep pure in my heart although I was ever hurt. I want to forget the unhappy moments and I don't like to be complicated.

Babies are pure and I am as pure as a baby. You might never be able to understand me as you have your own way of life and I have mine. You give me the impression that we are living in different worlds. You are like a king and I am like the Cinderella, or a maid. I can't know what will happen to us in the future but you are so far away from me!

Answer 3

3..You say that I am cold and do not care about

4..I just want to do a simple one because my heart had been injured

5..I would like to forget the unhappy things

6..I don’t like complicated things

7..Baby is the most simple, as with the fool

8..you can't understand me

9.. untill now, I think that we are not a world of people

10..As you are a king, and I just maids

11..I do not know what will happen between us after

12..How far between us ?
没改的好像没有错 我的也不一定全对 多采取采取别人的意见