Question

帮忙翻译一下(汉译英),急!非常非常感谢!

请不要用翻译软件,谢谢!内容如下:

第一段：
作者写作思路较为清晰，论文结构比较合理。论文首先介绍了大力发展汽车信贷业务的原因以及中国市场现有的汽车信贷业务，然后对银行和汽车金融公司提供的信贷业务进行对比分析，指出了各自的利弊，最后作者对中国汽车信贷存在的问题进行了分析，并指出了促进其发展的方法。
作者的具有一定的写作技巧，写作过程中能够使用了数据和图表来说明问题，也运用了金融学的基本理论。
论文的缺点在于对于最后一部分的论述分析不够全面和深入。

第二段：
论文层次清晰，首先介绍了工行网络银行业务的基本情况，进而分析了其存在的问题，最后指出了解决问题的办法，行文比较通顺。
论文的缺点在于内容不是很充分，对网络银行的剖析不够深入和具体，也没有使用大量的数据和图表来说明问题。

Answer 1

Writing a more clear idea of the author, a more reasonable thesis structure. First of all papers presented to develop the reasons for car credit business, as well as the Chinese market the existing car loanAnd then the banks and auto finance companies credit provided by a comparative analysis of the business, pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of each, and finally the author of China's auto credit problems are analyzed and pointed out that the promotion of its development.The author has some writing skills, writing process to use the data and charts to illustrate the problem using the basic theory of finance. The shortcomings of paper is the last part of the discussion and in-depth analysis is not comprehensive enough.
The second paragraph:
The level of a clear thesis, first introduced ICBC banking network the basic situation, and then analyzed the question of its existence, and finally pointed out the solution to the problem, compared to master the language.
The contents of the shortcomings of paper is not very full, the network of banks and specific analysis is not deep enough, nor the use of large amounts of data and charts to illustrate the problem.

Answer 2

机译

The first paragraph:
Writing a more clear idea of the author, a more reasonable thesis structure. First of all papers presented to develop the reasons for car credit business, as well as the Chinese market the existing car loan, and then the banks and auto finance companies credit provided by a comparative analysis of the business, pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of each, the last author the existence of China's auto credit Analysis of issues and pointed out that the promotion of its development.
The author has some writing skills, writing process to use the data and charts to illustrate the problem using the basic theory of finance.
The shortcomings of paper is the last part of the discussion and in-depth analysis is not comprehensive enough.

The second paragraph:
The level of a clear thesis, first introduced ICBC banking network the basic situation, and then analyzed the question of its existence, and finally pointed out the solution to the problem, compared to master the language.
The contents of the shortcomings of paper is not very full, the network of banks and specific analysis is not deep enough, nor the use of large amounts of data and charts to illustrate the problem.

Answer 3

First section:

The author's train of thought in his writing is comparatively distinct, the structure of thesis is relatively rational. The thesis introduces, first of all,the reasons for the vigorous expansion of car financial credit business, and the current car financial credit business on the Chinese market, and then conducts comparative analysis on the financial credit business provided by the banks and car finance companies, pointing out the respective advantages and disadvantages, and finally the author carries out analysis on China's car financial credit's existing problems,and calls attention to the method for promoting its development.
The author possesses certain writing skill, and is able to make use of data and diagrams to explain problems in his writing process, he also uses finance's fundamental theories.
The thesis' weak points lie in the final part where discussion on the analysis is lacking in comprehensiveness and depth.

Second section:
The arrangement of ideas of this thesis is explicit, it introduces firstly, the fundamental situation of the Industrial and Commercial Bank of China's network banking business, and further analyses its existing problems, and finally identifies ways of solving the problems,the manner of writing is relatively clear and smooth.
The weakness of this thesis lies in the content's slight lack of abundance, and the analysis on network banking is lacking in depth and comprehensiveness, it also does not use large quantity of data and diagrams to explain problems.

Answer 4

The first paragraph:
Writing a more clear idea of the author, a more reasonable thesis structure. First of all papers presented to develop the reasons for car credit business, as well as the Chinese market the existing car loan, and then the banks and auto finance companies credit provided by a comparative analysis of the business, pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of each, the last author the existence of China's auto credit Analysis of issues and pointed out that the promotion of its development.
The author has some writing skills, writing process to use the data and charts to illustrate the problem using the basic theory of finance.
The shortcomings of paper is the last part of the discussion and in-depth analysis is not comprehensive enough.

The second paragraph:
The level of a clear thesis, first introduced ICBC banking network the basic situation, and then analyzed the question of its existence, and finally pointed out the solution to the problem, compared to master the language.
The contents of the shortcomings of paper is not very full, the network of banks and specific analysis is not deep enough, nor the use of large amounts of data and charts to illustrate the problem.