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Later in the afternoon the boys put up there tent in the middle of the forest. A s soon as this was done they are all fell headache and want to sleep. So they creep into their tent a shortly afterwards they are all slept soundly. In the middle of the night one of them woke up and heard the monster’s call he was very afraid he call at his friends woke up and rush out of the tent and climb up the trees. When the monster’s call was moving away , they jumped down from the trees. Suddenly the monster’s call was moving quickly and near here of them . At that time they all say:“Oh my god!” They were told that the monster is injured in the call issued by the monkeys. It was a false alarm.

Answer 1

Later in the afternoon the boys put up their tent in the middle of the forest. As soon as it's done they all had headache and wanted to sleep. So they crept into their tent a shortly afterwards they are all slept soundly. In the middle of the night one of them woke up and heard the monster’s call. He was very scared,so he called his friends woke up and rushed out of the tent and climbed up in the trees. When the monster’s roar was fading away , they jumped down from the trees. Suddenly the monster’s roar was moving back quickly and became closer to them . At that time they all said:“Oh my god!” Later,they were told that the monster had got injured by the roar uttered by the monkeys. It was a false alarm.

改了一些单词，语法，以及拼写错误，呵呵~楼主参考一下吧

Answer 2

In the afternoon the tent guy in the forest. This is a complete sales as soon as they have fallen headache and want to sleep. So they climbed into the tent a soon they slept soundly. At midnight one woke up and heard the monster on the phone, and he was very afraid he called his friends wake up and rushed out of the tent, climbed up the tree. When the monster, when they came down from the tree. The telephone is the monster suddenly moving quickly, nearby. Then they all say: "oh, my god!" They were told, the monster is injured call issued a monkey. It was a false alarm.
在下午的帐棚盖在森林里。这是一个完整的销售只要他们已经头痛和想睡觉。所以他们爬进帐篷里一个很快他们睡的很香。半夜醒来,一听到这个怪物的电话,他非常害怕,他叫他的朋友叫醒,跑出了帐篷,爬上树。当怪物,当他们从树上下来。电话是怪物突然移动迅速,附近。然后,他们都说:“哦,我的上帝!”他们被告知,怪物是受伤的电话发出的猴子。这是一场虚惊。

Answer 3

Later in the afternoon, the boys put up their tent in the middle of the forest. As soon as this has been done, they all felt headache and wanted to sleep. So they crept into their tent a shortly afterwards they all slept soundly. In the middle of the night one of them woke up and heard the monster’s call. he was very afraid .he woke his friends up and rushed out of the tent and climbed up the trees. When the monster’s calling moved away , they jumped down from the trees. Suddenly the monster’s call moved quickly to them . At that time they all said:“Oh my god!” They found that the monster is injured in the call issued by the monkeys. It was a false alarm.

改过了，但倒数第二句没看懂，不知道要表达什么意思