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麻烦各位高手帮忙修改下这段英语！！

这是我论文的总结，论文导师让我改了N次了都不过，鄙人水平太低，求助各位高手帮忙修改一下语法错误，多谢!
Many literary critics believe that Gatsby is a major role in the American literature of the twentieth century, perhaps because there is no other role more in line with the theme of American Dream. Fitzgerald not only thinks of Jay Gatsby as an ambitious farmer driven by poverty ambition, but a hero pursuing American Dream. (Rubinstein, 1988) He has the characteristics of being a criminal, a romantic idealist in pursuit of the love.
As the author of The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald is one of the greatest writers in the U.S. His greatness is that he instinctively outside personal experience into the experience of the entire United States, reflected the temperament and outlook of the times inadvertently; He succeeded in his personal truth and the truth of the community in a melting furnace. Fitzgerald faced the issue of the” American dream” shattered. In The Great Gatsby, he used his personal experience to give Gatsby a profound symbolic significance. Through Gatsby's dream, struggle, frustrated, deflated, and he sharply criticized such as the U.S. post-war social values, ethics, and moral values, strongly expressed sorrow for the traditional values, traditional beliefs and the anxiety of the Destruction of the “American Dream.” （吴建国，2002）
The Great Gatsby is considered as a classic of American post-war fictions of the 1920s. (Spindlier, 1983) In the novel, Fitzgerald criticizes American society of the 1920s and demonstrates the dominant power of money, as well as human’s mindless self – indulgence. The employment of symbolism is the most striking artistic feature, which reveals Fitzgerald’s accomplished artistry. In the novel Fitzgerald uses a large number of beautiful and unique symbol and metaphor, so that readers in-depth understand the characters at the same time enhance the theme of the novel's power and artistic expression. To take the impression of the novel describes the way, describe both the warm and calm. Novel scenes with the main characters, the specific things with different colors has its own symbolic meaning, and these characters and scenes, things with the color combination get together for a perfect unity.
Because of some limitations, this research has only touched the tip of an iceberg. More studies are expected in the future.

Answer 1

Many literary critics believe that Gatsby is a major role in the American literature of the twentieth century，because there isn't another role more in line with the theme of American Dream. Fitzgerald not only thinks of Jay Gatsby as an ambitious farmer driven by poverty ambition, but alsoa hero pursuing American Dream. (Rubinstein, 1988) He has characteristiced of being a criminal, a romantic idealist in pursuit of the love.
As the author of The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald is one of the greatest writers in the U.S. His greatness is that he instinctively outside personal experience into the experience of the entire United States, reflected the temperament and outlook of the times inadvertently; He succeeded in his personal truth and the truth of the community in a melting furnace. Fitzgerald faced the issue of the "American dream” shattered. In The Great Gatsby, he used tohis personal experience to give Gatsby a profound symbolic significance.
Although Gatsby's dream, struggle, frustrated, deflated, and he sharply criticized such as the U.S. post-war social values, ethics, and moral values, strongly expressed sorrow for the traditional values, traditional beliefs and the anxiety of the Destruction of the “American Dream.” （吴建国，2002）
The Great Gatsby was considered as a classic of American post-war fictions of the 1920s. In the novel, Fitzgerald criticizes American society of the 1920s and demonstrates the dominant power of money, as well as human’s mindless self – indulgence.The employment of symbolism is the most striking artistic feature, which reveals Fitzgerald’s accomplished artistry. In the novel Fitzgerald uses a large number of beautiful and unique symbol and metaphor, so that readers in-depth understand the characters at the same time enhance the theme of the novel's power and artistic expression. To take the impression of the novel describes the way, described both the warm and calm. Novel scenes with the main characters, the specific things with different colors has its own symbolic meaning, and these characters and scenes, things with the color combination get together for a perfect unity.
Because of some limitations, this research has only touched the tip of an iceberg. More studies are expected in the future.

给你改了点小毛病，你再看看吧~

Answer 2

你的论文真的是乱的很。你可以先把你想表达的中文搞清楚，至少没有语病了再翻释，这样会好得多。

Answer 3

我只说一点，减少“中式英语”，多看书，要对自己有信心,不要只想依靠别人。

Answer 4

What can I do for so lazy a man as you?