Question

I heard that an old lady who had burned to death in her kitchen during tomb sweeping festival .

请高手分析这句话有语病吗？谢谢啊！

Answer 1

有语病，宾语从句缺少谓语，分解一下成分：
I heard that 【an old lady （who had burned to death in her kitchen） during tomb sweeping festival】 .
（）里面是修饰lady的定语从句，【】里面是宾语从句但是没有动词作谓语
所以将（）里面的who去掉，改成：
I heard that【 an old lady had burned to death in her kitchen during tomb sweeping festival】
我听说清明节的时候一个老妇人在她的厨房里被火烧死了。【】里面是宾语从句

Answer 2

有语病，heard后面的宾语从句没有谓语