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我国的旅行社目前正处于一个科学技术日新月异飞速向前发展的环境中。信息技术和通信技术以令人目不暇接的速度发展，尤其是互联网络的广泛流行，使得各种服务信息已近乎透明，且个性突出的游客们已不再满足于死板的标准化的旅游项目，要求量身定做，旅游行业内的竞争日趋激烈。这就要求旅行社必须采取现代化的管理手段，利用计算机的发展成果结合旅行社的业务特点，建立高效的旅行社管理系统，以迅速、准确地捕捉客户要求，并加以高效回应，使游客满意，才能摆脱被挤出的危险并在业内脱颖而出。
本系统针对北京开鑫旅行社的实际需求，采用ASP.NET技术和SQL SERVER 2000数据库管理系统作为工具进行开发。整个系统服务于游客、管理员、旅行社这三个不同的用户。从操作简便、界面美观、灵活实用的用户要求出发，设计开发的旅游资源子系统、在线报名子系统、员工管理子系统等功能，基本能满足游客的要求和旅行社工作人员的需要。
本论文主要介绍了本课题的开发背景、完成的功能和开发过程，并着重说明了开发设计的思想、技术难点和解决方案。

Answer 1

Our country's travel agency present is being in the environment which a science and technology changes with each new day rapidly develops forward. The information technology and the communication by the eyes cannot take it all in speed development, Internet's widely current, cause each kind of service information to approach particularly transparently, and the individuality prominent tourists no longer satisfy the stodgy standardized tourism program, the request quantity body custom make, in the traveling profession's competition is day by day intense. This request travel agency squeezes out must adopt modernized the management tool, using computer's development achievement union travel agency's service characteristic, establishes the highly effective travel agency management system management system, by rapid, catches the customer request accurately, and performs the highly effective response, makes the tourist to be pleased, can get rid the danger which and in industry in blooming. this system opens the Xin travel agency's physical demand in view of Beijing, uses the ASP.NET technology and SQL the SERVER 2000 database management system carries on the development as the tool. The overall system serves the tourist, the manager, travel agency these three different users. Is simple from the operation, the contact surface artistic, the nimble practical user requests to embark, the design development's tourist resources subsystem, the online registration subsystem, the staff manage functions and so on subsystem, basic can satisfy tourist's request and the travel agency staff's need. the present paper mainly introduced this topic's development background, completes the function and the performance history, and have emphasized the development design thought that the technical difficulty and the solution.

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