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如何写好雅思写作议论文task2

Answer 1

　雅思写作考试的议论文部分，其中argument类型的考题是最多的，它的准备首先是审题思路和观点走向的逻辑结构。也就是说你必须知道议论文分三部分，每部分有哪些思路(每条思路的主要观点)，以及主要观点及其信息的组织逻辑合理。衔接手段的灵活运用十分必要。

　　今天南通环球教育（原环球雅思）名师周京老师要介绍的是我称之为立论法的写作方式，该方法在雅思大作文写作文章用的文章结构是：全文的核心-论点-直接论证的分论点.-重申自己的观点。 须要注意的是对于每个段落核心分论点的扩展可采用：In other words(释义论证)；For example(举例论证)；The reason for this is that (原因)；As a result(影响/结果)；Conversely(对比论证)。这是三种最基本的论证方法。可以用一种，也可以用两种或三种。如下是立论法运用的一例，请看审题，思路和灵活合理衔接的是如何实现的。
　　真题：The tendency to copy is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumers' goods. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
　　审题: 关键词： 1.the tendency to copy
　　2.Popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer's goods
　　思路:
　　理由一：the symbol of mixture of different culture , economic integration
　　理由二：a form of self-expression , the presentation of personality ,mood and aesthetic appreciation
　　让步段(理由)：
　　1.plenty of manufactures to make more profits
　　2.certain groups without analyzing to purchase and imitate blindly.
　　转折：
　　1.limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits .
　　2.consumers to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase
　　结论：the irreversible tendency instead of imitating phenomenon
　　首段：转述题目+表明立场
　　In current society especially in recent years, purchasing and chasing fashionable clothes and other consumer's products emerging dramatically turns out to be common phenomenon of society. Some people deem it is the result of mutual imitating, however, as far as I am concerned that it is the inevitable tenor of globalization and economic integration and the Internet popularizing.
　　第二段：不认同 ，理由一
　　理由段，理由段是文章的主体部分由两种写法：①段落中心句+支持句 ②段落中心句+支持句+例子
　　该段主要陈述自己支持的某种观点或好处，可以只有一个理由
　　To begin with, purchasing the popularity of fashionable clothes and other consumer's products is the symbol of mixture of different culture, economic integration and advanced technology, to give rise to the lifestyle changing, which can be well explained by the following example. Taking the eminent Mobile Phone Apple for example, it is widely accepted and applied by increasing prevalent number of people around the world especially for Chinese, due to its extraordinary function and humanized style of designing.
　　第三段：理由段，不认同理由二
　　In addition, chasing the popularity of fashion clothing and other consumption goods is also a form of self-expression, the presentation of personality and aesthetic appreciation. Namely, a sizable percentage of individuals tend to have more sense of identity toward the main fashionable tendency, which can be attributed to the powerful and potential influence of media and advertisement as well as the certain group who are living around.
　　第四段：让步段：让步句承认某种观点的合理性，转折句对该观点加以反驳。
　　There is no denying that plenty of manufactures imitate other eminent band to make more profits, and the certain groups without analyzing and distinguishing purchase blindly. However, in terms of manufactures, imitating can merely obtain limited temporary profits instead of the long-term and plentiful economic benefits. In terms of consumers, they will return to be more sensible levels to make the determined attempt to purchase more suitable and fashionable clothes and reasonable consumption goods according their financial situation.
　　结论：总结全文+强调立场
　　On balance, taking into account the above perspectives, I am convinced that the popularity of fashion is the irreversible tendency brought about by advanced communication, soaring technology and the progress of economic and cultural integration instead of the so-called "tendency of copy".