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摘 要：J2ME是针对移动电话等一些小型设备而设计的Java语言，它极大地提高了移动电话支持手机游戏的能力。论文着眼于J2ME技术的应用，介绍了在J2ME的相关技术下开发完成一款RPG游戏。该游戏严格遵循软件工程的设计思想，使用J2ME语言结合Eclipse开发平台来实现。论文重点介绍了游戏的实现过程：包括用户需求描述、游戏设计、游戏实现、游戏测试与维护等。在开发过程中，重点掌握使用J2ME开发手机游戏的流程。

我用金山翻译后的是：
Abstract：J2ME is targeted at mobile phones and other equipment designed for small-scale Java language, it greatly enhanced the mobile phone's ability to support mobile gaming. Paper focus on the application of J2ME technology, introduced in J2ME related technologies developed under a RPG game. Strictly abide by the game design of software engineering, combined with the use of J2ME language to achieve the Eclipse development platform. Paper focuses on the implementation of the game: including the description of user needs, game design, game to achieve, games testing and maintenance. In the development process, focusing on the development and use J2ME mobile gaming process.
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Answer 1

J2ME,
which
greatly
enhances
the
abilities
of
mobile
phone
to
support
mobile
gaming,
is
a
kind
of
Java
language
which
is
designed
for
mobile
phones
and
some
small
equipment.
The
thesis
focuses
on
the
application
of
J2ME
technology,
and
introduces
that
an
RPG
game
is
developed
under
the
technologies
related
in
J2ME.
This
game
strictly
follows
the
design
philosophy
of
the
software
engineering,
and
combines
the
J2ME
language
with
Eclipse
development
platform
to
realize.
The
thesis
puts
its
emphasis
on
introducing
the
process
of
accomplishing
the
game:
including
the
description
of
the
users’
requirement,
the
design
of
the
game,
the
realization
of
the
game,
the
game
play
testing
and
maintenance,
etc.
During
the
process
of
development,
we
grasp
main
point
of
the
process
of
using
J2ME
to
develop
cell
phone
game.
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Answer 2

J2ME is a Java language designed for small-scale equipments such as mobile phones, it enhanced the mobile phone's ability greatly to support mobile gaming.
The paper focuses on the application of J2ME technology, introducing a RPG game which developed by using the J2ME technology.
The games runs strictly under the engineering's thoughts of designing, it was achieved by combining the use of J2ME language and Eclipse platform.
Paper focuses on the implementation of the game: including the description of users' needs, game designing, game performing, game testing and maintenance.
In the process of development, we should focus on the process by using the J2ME technology to develop mobile games.

Answer 3

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翻译答案是:
Abstract: J2ME for mobile phones and other equipment designed for small-scale Java language, it greatly enhanced the mobile phone's ability to support mobile gaming. Papers focus on the application of J2ME technology, introduced in J2ME related technologies developed under a RPG game. Strictly abide by the game design of software engineering, combined with the use of J2ME language to achieve the Eclipse development platform. Paper focuses on the implementation of the game: including the description of user needs, game design, game to achieve, games testing and maintenance. In the development process, focusing on the development and use J2ME mobile gaming process.

Answer 4

Abstract: J2ME for mobile phones and other equipment designed for small-scale Java language, it greatly enhanced the mobile phone's ability to support mobile gaming. Papers focus on the application of J2ME technology, introduced in J2ME related technologies developed under a RPG game. Strictly abide by the game design of software engineering, combined with the use of J2ME language to achieve the Eclipse development platform. Paper focuses on the implementation of the game: including the description of user needs, game design, game to achieve, games testing and maintenance. In the development process, focusing on the development and use J2ME mobile gaming process.看看我翻译的准不准确