Question

correct the following sentences please

Every day, every hour, every minute, every second, are in a class by themselves!
If you don’t catch them, they will never be back, will never exist at all.
Write down every time you experienced every day. See back when it past.
So fast time past! It like the train, and you and I like the passengers, you don’t realize it’s moving, but its do moving, and very fast! Terribly it has a terminal somewhere or intermediate stops unexpected. It is limited, but you are always unrealized. By another imagery time is money; if you don’t use it then you throw it away.
including the interpunctions

Answer 1

Every day, every hour, every minute, every second, they are in a class by themselves!
If you don’t catch them, they will never be back, will never exist at all.（这里不能用exist，我不知道你是怎么翻译的。最好换一个词）
Write down your everyday experiences. look back
time has gone so fast ! It like(这里可以去掉或保留 it ) a（需要用a，前面没有提到train 后面就不能用the） train, （去掉and） you and I like （去掉the，一样前面没有提到passengers，后面不能用the） passengers, you don’t realize it’s （不知道是否注意，还是说明一下，这里的’s是 was的short form）moving, but （建议把这句去掉。加个but····是完全没必要）, and very fast! Terribly（这里用terribly 难以理解） it has a terminal somewhere or intermediate stops unexpected(我想我明白你要说的意思,there will a terminal or intermediate stop 但这里用intermediate貌似不合适). It is limited, but you are always unrealized（可以这么用：but is not always be realized）. By another imagery time is money（直言，这句我看不懂，好乱）; if you don’t use it then you throw it away. （最后一句没有错，但以后还是别用翻译来写）

直接翻译是用另一种语言的语法解释英文。这样错误总是很多，以后也造成这样的习惯。

Answer 2

觉得是典型的中式英语，建议你还是重译吧。

Answer 3

错太多，改不过来。。。

Answer 4

错好多！这篇文章题目叫错多星吧