Question

请帮忙改一下这篇作文(很简单的)，谢谢

请帮忙改一下这篇作文：
大概意思是：妈妈现在70岁了，她以前是老师，现在已退休，女儿以我最难忙的人为题写一篇关于妈妈的文章。
my mother is 70 years old , she is short and thin. she has a round face and curly short hair.
My mother is my first teacher. I can still remember clearly the days when she told me stories, played games with me and taught me math 、Chinese.... She is a good mother.
My mother has some qualities. she was a teacher. she taught math. she taught her students very carefully and was very strict with them. Whenever her student made mistake. she always educated and helped them patiently. she did her work very well and was loved by her students and their parents. she was really a good teacher, too. I learn a lot from her. I love my mother.

Answer 1

请对照着原文看吧，大小写啦 标点啦 都有改 有问题 hi我
My mother is 70 years old. She is short and thin. She has a round face and curly short hair.
My mother is my first teacher. I can still remember clearly the days when she told me stories, played games with me and taught me maths 、Chinese.... She is really a good mother.
My mother has some qualities.(你想表达什么？她有些好品质？) She was a maths teacher. She taught her students very carefully and was very strict with them. Whenever her students made mistakes, she always educated and helped them patiently. she did her work very well and was loved by her students and their parents. As you can see,she was also a good teacher. I have learnt a lot from her. I love my mother.

Answer 2

非常好！Good!