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急！！！跪求英语高手翻译一段中文为英文！！！！

跪求英语高手翻译一段中文为英文！！！！可加分！！！
请不要给我用在线软件翻译，如果那个可以解决的话我就不要在这边求了，自己也能行，谢谢！

内容：
非常抱歉在您百忙之中又一次打扰您，这是因为再未收到贵校的回应时，我对自己重新进行了一次审视，却未发现原因。我相信我是一个优秀的学生，这从我的成绩中可以看出，我自信我有着较高的GPA，这尤其体现在在专业课上。在学习方面，我一直是一个勇于创新和不肯服输的人，在设计上也有着自己独特的想法和执着，这我相信在我的专业作品中可以看出。另外，我有着相关的实践经验，虽然没有辉煌的业绩，但是这也是我努力学习着的一个证明。在对自己的审视中，我自认为我是一个朴实和诚恳的人，这也许使得我在自我评价方面疏忽了我本身的一些优点而没有将他们体现在我的自我陈述当中，但我认为这并不是我的一个缺点，用真实的言语去表现才是生活的本质。而且，最重要的是，我想我在学习能力上是不会有任何问题的，举例来说，我曾今对flash是一窍不通，在无人指导只凭自己钻研的情况下我自己将它提升到了一个高度，这也体现在我其它的学习能力方面。我写这封信给您的原因是如果我因为某些原因不幸被您放弃了，请您就我的材料进行一个重新审视。假如结果还是觉得我没有进入贵校的资格的话，请您给我一个解释，以让我重新审视自己并改正我的缺点，我想您会乐意帮助一个积极上进的学生的，谢谢。

Answer 1

I'm sorry to bother you again,but it's for the reason that I haven't received your reply yet. I examine myself again, finding no faults exist. I consider myself a good student, which can be seen from my results of tests. I'm confident that I have high GPA(GPA为何?不懂), especially in the professional lessons that I major. When it comes to studies, I'm a creative student who always refuses to take defeat lying down(字典给的).You can also easily find unique thoughts and inflexible spirits in my designs. What's more, I am experienced in the related fields , though lacking outstanding achievements. Examining myself , I find myself a person who is always honest and loyal. For the sake of it , I'm always forgetting to describe some good qualties of me. Obviously it's not a weakness, at least I think so, and I think it's essential to describe my life in true words.In addtion,I have no difficulties in studying.I'm now execellent in FLASH though I knew nothing about it at the beginning and no teachers offered any help ,which now can be a good proof for my ability to study.
I'm now writing to ask you to examine my materials again if I'm unfortunely knocked out for a certain reason, and please explain it if I'm still not admitted to your college after you examine the materials again, which will surely offer me a good chance to overcome my weaknesses. I'm sure that you are kind to help a student who always wants to make progess in studies.
Thank u.

可能后面两个句子写得太复杂,,若选用还需您改改. 再有一处:"，但是这也是我努力学习着的一个证明。" 这句和前面的句子接起来有点儿困难,而且我也没读懂,就没翻译.原文是中文,所以可能写的很CHINGLISH.
望您满意.

Answer 2

Very sorry to you once again in his busy schedule to disturb you, because it does not receive your response again, I once again, but did not find reasons. I believe that I am a good student, this from my grades, I am confident that I have higher GPA, particularly in the course. In the study, I have been an innovative and refused to defeat in design, also have their own unique ideas and persistent, which I believe in my professional can be seen in the works. In addition, I have relevant experience, although not brilliant achievement, but this is the one I study hard. In his look, I think I am a simple and honest people, it may make me in the self-evaluation neglect I some advantages and did not put them to reflect on my ego statement, but I think it is not one of my shortcomings, with the real words to express is the essence of life. And, most importantly, I think I'm learning ability is there won't be any problem, for example, I had to flash is nothing, only by studying the guidance I oneself will it to a height, it also reflected in my other learning ability. I write this letter to you the reason is that if I were you, for some reason, please quit my material for a review. If I do not feel or enter the university qualifications, please give me an explanation, let me correct my and re-examine your faults, I think you'll be glad to help a motivated student, thank you.

Answer 3

Very sorry to you once again in his busy schedule to disturb you, because it does not receive your response again, I once again, but did not find reasons. I believe that I am a good student, this from my grades, I am confident that I have higher GPA, particularly in the course. In the study, I have been an innovative and refused to defeat in design, also have their own unique ideas and persistent, which I believe in my professional can be seen in the works. In addition, I have relevant experience, although not brilliant achievement, but this is the one I study hard. In his look, I think I am a simple and honest people, it may make me in the self-evaluation neglect I some advantages and did not put them to reflect on my ego statement, but I think it is not one of my shortcomings, with the real words to express is the essence of life. And, most importantly, I think I'm learning ability is there won't be any problem, for example, I had to flash is nothing, only by studying the guidance I oneself will it to a height, it also reflected in my other learning ability. I write this letter to you the reason is that if I were you, for some reason, please quit my material for a review. If I do not feel or enter the university qualifications, please give me an explanation, let me correct my and re-examine your faults, I think you'll be glad to help a motivated student, thank you.

怎么样？

Answer 4

I'm sorry to disturb you when you are so busy. I'm worried because I reevaluated myself when waiting for your reply, however I cannot find the reason. I believe I am an outstanding student, and my academice results can prove this. I am confident about my high GPA, especially for those courses in my specialized field. In school, I have always been brave to bring forth innovations, and never say no to difficulties.

On the other hand, I have a lot of relevant experience. Though there is no extrodinary achievement, but my experience reveals that I am very hardworking.

In self-reflection,I regard myself as a man of honesty and sincerity. Because of this I may overlook some of my merits and failed to demostrate them in my personal statement. But I still believe that being true is the essence of life.

Most importantly, I do not think I will have problems with learning. For example, I knew nothing about Flash,but with no help from other people I improved my ability to use the software to a new level. This is can also be proved in other aspects of my learning ability.

I write this letter in the hope that if you are to refuse me for some reasons, please reconsider my application. If you still think that I am not qualified for entrance to your university, please give me further explanation, so that I can find out my weakness. You must be very willing to help a student who is keen on making progress.

Thank you!

Answer 5

Excuse me for disturbing again. It is only because that I throughly reconsidered my situation and conditions and still cannot understand why I haven't been able to get a reply from you(这里用学校的名字比较好，以免指明道姓。如：from XX University). I believe I am an excellent student, which shows from my grades. I believe I have a high level of GPA, which especially shows on my performance in my major courses. With studying, I and creative and insistent. I also try for unique ideas and consistency with my designs, which shows on my works I believe. Other than that, I do have relating work experiences. Even though I do not have great working achievements, it is still proof of me trying all I can to learn. In my consideration, I am down to earth and honest, which might have resulted in undervaluing myself in my statement. But I do not think this is a week point for me, as the bottom line for life should be expressing true thoughts. And most importantly, I do not think I have any problems what so ever when it comes to learning abilities. For example, I used to have no idea about Flash(建议这里用 flash making 或者你学的软件的名字，例如Dreamewaver什么的，听起来会专业一点), but I have reached a certain level now all by myself, without anyone's instruction. And the same passion and learning ability also apply in other ways(这一句帮你稍改了一下，外国导师会喜欢一点，“同样的热情和学习能力也体现在其他方面”。如果要你写的原句的话是:"And this also apply to my other learning abilities.") The reason why I wrote this is to ask, please, give me some reconsideration, if I am off the list for some grey reasons. If I really do not qualify for XX (学校名字), then please give me an explanation, so I can re-exam myself and improve. I hope you would not mind helping an eager student. Thank you so much.

Answer 6

无聊，没水平干这事