Question

求汉译英高手帮忙翻译一首诗

你在微笑，我的心在飞跃，你在哭泣，我的心在碎裂。你在忧郁，我的心在徘徊。清晨的露珠代表我的一颗真心，蓝天的白云带表我的一片痴心。如果你愿意，我将用我一生的爱来照顾你。

Answer 1

手工拙译如下，供参考：

你在微笑，
You are smiling
我的心在飞跃，
My heart is rejoicing
你在哭泣，
You are crying
我的心在碎裂。
My heart is being broken
你在忧郁，
You are melancholy
我的心在徘徊。
My heart is wandering
清晨的露珠代表我的一颗真心，
The dewdrops in the early morning represent my true love
蓝天的白云带表我的一片痴心。
The white clouds in the clear blue sky show my infatuation
如果你愿意,
If you wish so
我将用我一生的爱来照顾你。
I will take care of you with all the love of my life time.

Answer 2

You're smiling
My heart's leaping
You're sweeping
My heart's broken
You're melancholy
My heart's wondering
Morning's dewdrop is for my true heart
Blue sky and pure clouds is for my infatuation
If you wish
I'm willing to spend my hole life
Love here, to U

Answer 3

You are smiling,
My heart is flying,
You are weeping,
My heart is breaking,
You feel gloomy.
My heart wonders around.
My heart to you is as pure as dew in the early morning ,
My affection to you is as virgin as white cloud in the blue sky.
If you will,
all my life,
all my love,
love you and attend you forever .
随意翻的，谨供参考~~~~~~~~~~~~

Answer 4

When you smell ,my heart is flying
When you cry ,my heart is being broken
My heart is wandering around as you feel blue
Early morning dew can stand for my soul
Blue sky and white cloud can show my infatuation
If you're willingful,i'll spend my whole life to take care of you
很认真的翻译，虽然诗的味道被我翻的乱七八糟的，还是希望能帮到你

Answer 5

有心仪的外国女孩么？ 英文的诗有自己的韵律，强烈建议尝试了解一下，然后尝试用英文的思路作诗，和我们的用法还是比较不同地，不建议你这样直接翻译过去。她也许读得懂你的心思，但是这样的写法会让她觉得非常非常怪。加油咯