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大家来帮我改改我的英语作文啊

题目是:what are the advantages or disadvantages of traveling by public transport ? 下面是我的作文:at present ,our life can not leave the public transport .we usually take bus or subway when we go to school or go to work .we use them because they are very convenient and safe .but in fact it is uncomfortable .so i think it is more convenient and comfortable to take our own car to travel .and public transport is slow .we are young ,so we can not waste any time . 就是这样 应该有很多措 50分不是这么好拿的 最好能给我修改下最好

Answer 1

题目是：乘坐公共交通工具旅行有哪些优点或缺点？
这个问题我高三时也写过。
你的作文意思是：目前，我们的生活离不开公共交通。当我们去上学或上班时，我们通常采取做公交车和地铁的方式。我们使用它们是因为它们都非常方便，安全。但其实是不舒服的。因此，我认为开我们自己的汽车旅行更方便，舒适。公共交通十分缓慢。我们年轻，所以我们不能浪费任何时间。

At present, we can not live without public transport.When we go to school or work, we usually take the bus and subway to do way.This is because they give us the convenience and security.However, this is uncomfortable. Because a lot of people by bus, car is very crowded, and delays on the way a lot of time. On the contrary, if we are to open your own car travel will be more convenient and comfortable.

As the saying goes， "a coin has two faces."Take public transport vehicles to fulfill their advantages and disadvantages!Therefore, we can take different situations to take a different approach.

仅供参考，也许也有语法错误，能力有限了。不知道你们的评分标准，自己选合适的内容改吧！

Answer 2

正文第一行“....leave the public transport.....”我觉得应该把“the”去掉，因为“public transport”不是什么特指吧？前面又没有出现过。
最后一行“and”改为“others”应该会好点吧？是说另一方面的意思。
“slow”改为“slowy”更合适吧，是表达慢的意思。

本人已经一年多没学英语了，只是凭记忆说说而已，有什么错的地方还请见谅！！！

Answer 3

我根据你的文章，自己改的。
At present,people are more and more depent on the public transport. Usually, we go to school or go to work by bus or subway.We choose them because of their benifits such as convenience and safety. However,the coin always has two sides.Uncomfortable and slow are the weakless of public transport.It is too crowed to have our own place. Besides,in order to get more passengers ,buses and subway always bypass,which takes more time to get to the destinations. For some busy people,time is life,which means they can not waste any time.
For differant people,they have differant choose.The old prefer bus to entertain time.The young choose personal transport to save time.I think if we benifit from its goods and avoid the bads, public transport will do better for people's life.

就这些了，做了点改动，希望你可以喜欢