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英语高手帮忙翻译一段英文

这是我自己写的一段，大家帮忙翻译一下，我想和老外说说我昨天发生的事情 但是我自己很多东西表达不出来
昨天下班后，我在一家餐厅吃好饭，到我住的小区后面的一条河边做了一会，抽了根烟，烟到一半，突然下起了很大的雨，我来不及躲，被雨淋湿了全身，最后我感冒了

谢谢大家了 ，我献上全部的分数

Answer 1

这是我自己写的一段，大家帮忙翻译一下，我想和老外说说我昨天发生的事情 但是我自己很多东西表达不出来
昨天下班后，我在一家餐厅吃好饭，到我住的小区后面的一条河边做了一会，抽了根烟，烟到一半，突然下起了很大的雨，我来不及躲，被雨淋湿了全身，最后我感冒了
This is my own section of writing, we help translate something, I want foreigners to talk about what happened yesterday, I own a lot of things but I do not come out to express
Yesterday, after work, I eat a restaurant meal, to the district I live behind a river made for a while, smoked a cigarette, smoke half, suddenly played the next big rain, I have no time to hide, was Rain soaked the body, finally, I got a cold

Answer 2

尽量口语化的答案，单词和句式都尽量选择最常见、自然的。

Yesterday after work, I had my dinner at a restaurant.
昨天下班后，我在一家餐厅吃好饭,

Then I went to the small river behind our living area, and sat by it for a while.
到我住的小区后面的一条河边坐了一会。

I lit a cigarette, but all of a sudden, it began to pour heavily before I could finish smoking.
我点了根烟，可是抽到一半，却突然下起瓢泼大雨。

It all happened too fast. I got caught in the rain and was wet through.
事出突然，我来不及躲，被雨淋了个透。

Now I've got a cold.
最后我感冒了。

Answer 3

at first ,your chinese have a lot of errors such as "我住的小区后面的一条河边做了一会" .there is "坐 “but not "做" .

yesterday , after my work ,I have finished my dinner in a restaurant and then ,I sat behind my house which beside a rover .There was a heavy rain when I was smoking half a cigarette .And ,I have no way to defent this ,so ,my body has wet then ,I've got a cold .

Answer 4

Yesterday, after getting off work and eating at a restaurant,I went to a lake behind my neighbourhood to sit for awhile and to smoke a cigarette. But halfway through my cigarette, it suddenly started rain really hard. I didn't have enough time to hide and got soaked all over. And then I caught a cold.

Answer 5

Yesterday after work,I had dinner in a restaurant.Then I sat a while beside a river behind my living area,where I smoke a cigarette.But halfway through my smoke,it suddenly rained cats and dogs and there was no time for me to hide myself.So I was wet from head to toe and caught a bad cold in the end.