Question

在线英语句子改错

急··几个句子改错不要在线翻译的 给分的
To my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages
traveling both by train.Travel by plane is
on the teip, but it is too expensive. Unless you travel by
train ,it is not expensive and quite safety and you can
appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the railway.

Answer 1

1.To my opinion中to 改为 in
【注解：in my opinion 是固定用法表示 “在我看来/以我的观点来看”，后引出观点】

2.Travel by plane 改为to travel by plane或traveling/travelling（“l”双写单写都可以） by plane
【注解：分析句意可知，Travel by plane 此时作主语，所以用动词不定式或V-ing形式，一般用V-ing形式】

3.but it is too expensive中it去掉
【注解：因为前面是逗号，这是一个小分句，与前句共用一个主语】

4.quite safety中safety改成safe
【注解：safe-形容词，safety-名词，safely-副词，注意区分】

5.sceneries改为scenery
【注解：scenery是可数名词，复数形式-sceneries但是它经常以单数形式出现。如：enjoying the varied mountain scenery.欣赏不同的山景。
您可以通过如下词语来理解：
abscence
clothing
film
help
furniture 家具
machinery 机械
news
scenery 风景
sugar
traffic 交通
即，一些名词虽分单数、复数，但出现次数多的总是单数词】

祝您学习更上一层楼！

Answer 2

To my opinion改成 In my opinion
Travel by plane 改成 Traveling by plane
it is too expensive去掉it
quite safety 改成quite safe

Answer 3

1. to- in
2. travel-travelling
3. on- with
4. safety-safe
5. sceeneries-scenery

Answer 4

To my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages traveling both by train. .

1. 按某人的意见/据某人看来 in one's opinion 是习惯用法，所以 to my opinion 要改为 in my opinion
2. both 位置不对，应该是 both advantages and disadvantages （既有利也有弊）

Travel by plane is on the teip, but it is too expensive

3. 动词原形 travel 不能用作主语，应该用非谓语动词动名词或不定式，此处用动名词 travelling 较为妥当。
4. on the teip 其中的 teip 不知道把那个词写错了，如果改为 on the trip 倒是“在旅途上”，但是放在句子里说不同，是否丢了关键词，斗胆把这句话改为 Traveling by plane is convenient on the trip（旅行中乘飞机比较方便）

Unless you travel by train ,it is not expensive and quite safety and you can appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the railway
5. Unless ... “如果不乘火车”和后面的“不昂贵”和“安全”意思矛盾。改为 if；
6. expensive and quite safety 是并列的表语，但是 expensive 是形容词而 safety 是名词，把后者改为形容词 safe。
7. sceneriry 是不可数名词，不能用复数。
8. 道轨有两条，改为 railways.