Question

英语句子改错

beijin,the capital of china which has the long history!
beijin is the capital of china which has the long history!
beijin which the capital of china has the long history!有对的句子吗？最好的答案怎么写啊？

Answer 1

beijin,the capital of china which has the long history!
这句从应试角度来讲，可能会认为不对，原因：主句不完整，缺少谓语；但如果把“,”前后两部分看作一对同位语，放在口语里也不一定错，意思为“北京，拥有悠久历史的中国的首都！”看上去像个口号。

beijin is the capital of china which has the long history!
这句在语法上没有错，意思为“北京是中国的首都，中国有悠久的历史”。但是不是要表示这个意思我就不知道了。

beijin which the capital of china has the long history!
这句话肯定是不对，which 后面的部分应该是一个从句，从句也是句，不能缺少动词，所以这句话可以写作“beijin which is the capital of china has the long history!”这句话也可以用同位语来表达，“beijin, the capital of china, has the long history!”两个“,”之间即同位语。

Answer 2

你想说的是北京历史悠久还是中国历史悠久呢，因为你的句子写的都有点歧义并且也不太对，我假设你说的是中国历史悠久吧（感觉应该是这个意思），于是正确的说法应该是：
China has a long history, whose capital city is Beijing.
要是你想说北京历史悠久呢，可以这样说：
Beijing,the capital city of China, has a long history.

Answer 3

第2句.不过要把of China 移到句尾.
Beijing is the capital which has the long history of China.
或者是,Beijing has the long history that is the capital of China.

北京是中国的首都,并且有着悠久的历史.

Answer 4

beijin,the capital of china, has the long history!

Answer 5

我是英语老师，帮帮你。
这个句子不要写得那么复杂。
Beijing,the capital of China,has the long history.
祝你进步！